Comment from 24chas

Excellent

This was very beautiful, Jewell. Really liked the picture that went along with the poem as well. Looked like a greeting card. Nice job.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2006

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2006

I appreciate it chas.

Comment from LarkSong

Excellent

So, so tender and sweet--Hi, JJ--Everything about this is just yummy--breathtakingly beautiful and incredibly touching...Truly special.

Sincerely,
Lark

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2006

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2006

I miss my babies!

Comment from Janilou

Exceptional

Move me to tears, why don't you? :-)

This is so beautiful. The presentation is also superb. What a gorgeous photo.

How I remember those days. They are gone so quickly. Like you, I long for the grandchildren to come.

What a blessing your words are here. Wonderful memories.
Thank you for writing this. This is inspired.

Blessings,
Jan

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2006

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2006

Don't cry Jan...wait, second thought....You did it first!

Comment from AuroraSky

Exceptional

The softness of a babe's skin and the delicate aroma that is unique to them...the rose pic is so perfect for this poem-- it captures the sensory feel...and memories...though, grandchildren are something that my lot better wait a few more years before giving me! LOL

Love this poem...it's a very beautiful moment shared.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2006

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2006

I almost put all that in there too but it would have given the final secret away. ;)

Comment from suresh kumar

Excellent

Hi Jewell - Grandchildren???!!! Anyway you gave a twist in the end in this poem. And everything is so true. Can any love equal this? It is like ove for God. You have poured a lot of sentiments and emotions into this poem. Well done.

.suresh kumar.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2006

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2006

I already have one, suresh. She is five. Thank you for the great review.

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Hi Jewell. What a beautiful delicate piece of poetry. I like the artwork as it really has that baby feel to it with the delicate pink. There's nothing like the love of a mother for her baby is there? You're not old enough to be a gran are you Jewell?

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 Comment Written 07-Nov-2006

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2006

Oh yes, I am old enough...I have a five yr. old grand daughter. (yes my pic is recent lol)

Comment from Dreamdancer

Excellent

Hi Miss J,
Grandchildren? Wow... Another wonderful poem. It allows the reader to feel the mothers love of her child. Thanks for sharing my friend...Buddy

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 Comment Written 07-Nov-2006

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2006

Hi Buddy. Thanks for the review. Always a pleasure.