AI Future
What a scary world if we start depending on AI39 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great poem. I think someday AI will replace all of us and then what will we do? I think we all need to think on our own. I have a hard time trusting people, so all I have is myself.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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This is a great poem. I think someday AI will replace all of us and then what will we do? I think we all need to think on our own. I have a hard time trusting people, so all I have is myself.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Cecilia, I thank you for your very kind comments regarding my AI poem.
I fear for our youth. I appreciated your opinion dearly.
Do you have trouble trusting us?? I hope not.
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No, I trust all of my FS friends. I feel safe in this forum.
Comment from Carasdreams
A snappy piece that nails AI attitudes to the wall. I like this, it's not preachy or condemning AI, but rather the person who cannot think without it's help. I also like the fact that by saying 'your talent's unknown, if....' as it places the onus on the thinking of the reader, but without pushing it in their face.
Overall, a really strong message about AI that seems simple, but is very thought provoking,
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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A snappy piece that nails AI attitudes to the wall. I like this, it's not preachy or condemning AI, but rather the person who cannot think without it's help. I also like the fact that by saying 'your talent's unknown, if....' as it places the onus on the thinking of the reader, but without pushing it in their face.
Overall, a really strong message about AI that seems simple, but is very thought provoking,
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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I thank you for your very kind comments regarding my AI poem.
I truly fear for our youth. And I appreciate your opinion dearly
Comment from estory
This is going to march on to some kind of conclusion, but like you, I think the end result is going to be bad. You can use AI to write, but what kind of satisfaction is there in that? People wonder why they are so unsatisfied. It's because they put zero effort into anything anymore. Just push a button and ask the computer. I don't know what they will do for a living either; hundreds of millions of jobs are going to disappear in this technology. I wrote a whole collection of poetry on this subject called Artificial Intelligence, it's in my portfolio. estory
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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This is going to march on to some kind of conclusion, but like you, I think the end result is going to be bad. You can use AI to write, but what kind of satisfaction is there in that? People wonder why they are so unsatisfied. It's because they put zero effort into anything anymore. Just push a button and ask the computer. I don't know what they will do for a living either; hundreds of millions of jobs are going to disappear in this technology. I wrote a whole collection of poetry on this subject called Artificial Intelligence, it's in my portfolio. estory
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your thoughts on the subject, estory, as they duplicate mine completely. I do worry about our youth and for jobs in the future. I will look at your writings on the subject. Thanks again.
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
Great 5-7-5 poem. I like that you followed the word count and kept the rhymes at the same time. Nicely executed.
Now for the content, I viewed AIs as tools. I am excited to use and develop them (not for FanStory post of course, because that's against the rules lol)
All in all, I enjoyed the poem. Best wishes for the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Great 5-7-5 poem. I like that you followed the word count and kept the rhymes at the same time. Nicely executed.
Now for the content, I viewed AIs as tools. I am excited to use and develop them (not for FanStory post of course, because that's against the rules lol)
All in all, I enjoyed the poem. Best wishes for the contest!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Hi Anna, I am not against AI, but against relying on it and stopping the own use of our own brain. You know what I mean? I am a little worried for our youth and hoping it won't destroy the minds of kids who use it instead of their own brain. That is why I say, talent's unknown if we don't think on our own.
So I agree with you and appreciate your opinion. Thanks so much!
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Ah, you are right. There’s always a risk of misuse and completely relying on AIs. Now I get it!
Comment from LJbutterfly
All of AI's information came from human brains. However, AI can calculate, combine, and analyze it much faster than the human brain.
An artist I know posted an item of her work on the computer, and AI, in a flash, described every detail. I'm sure it could summarize a book.
Your poem provides a thought-provoking message. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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All of AI's information came from human brains. However, AI can calculate, combine, and analyze it much faster than the human brain.
An artist I know posted an item of her work on the computer, and AI, in a flash, described every detail. I'm sure it could summarize a book.
Your poem provides a thought-provoking message. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Hi Lorraine, what scares me about AI is that the information at our fingertips for the younger generation especially may make them not use their minds as well. I fear for people's jobs and am seeing signs of people using it here on FS. I thank you for your thoughts. I love listening to everyone's opinion on the subject.
Comment from Terry Broxson
I think you earned a six because the first two lines are excellent and timely. I know I get suggestions from my software program. I don't use them because the suggestions are bland and not in my voice, but I do like them to correct spelling, punctuation, etc.
My thought on the last line is that it could somehow say, "So avoid the AI zone." In other words, don't let them get in the AI zone. But my suggestion would most likely mess up the syllable count, which is why I should never review poetry.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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I think you earned a six because the first two lines are excellent and timely. I know I get suggestions from my software program. I don't use them because the suggestions are bland and not in my voice, but I do like them to correct spelling, punctuation, etc.
My thought on the last line is that it could somehow say, "So avoid the AI zone." In other words, don't let them get in the AI zone. But my suggestion would most likely mess up the syllable count, which is why I should never review poetry.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Awe, thanks Terry for this amazing rating and review for my little 5-7-5.
I weighed what you had to say and I changed it to say "Avoid AI zone."
I use AI when I google things but in my writing, I never use it. (Unless you say that Grammarly is AI. Of course I do my own writing and let it just correct my grammar and some punctuation because I have always been a comma queen. However, I have to watch it close because it may changed the main thing I am trying to say. I many times dismiss what it says.
Thanks for your suggestions. I hope you like what I did with it.
And again thanks for the stars!
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I think it reads better.
Comment from jacquelyn popp
I enjoyed your poem! Nicely done. It offers a thought provoking perspective, especially with the lines " your talent's unknown/ if you don't think on your own," which highlight the importance of independent thought and creativity. The message about being careful when in the AI zone is both timely and intriguing, urging readers to stay true to their own voice while navigating the digital world. The flow of the poem was smooth, and the way you conveyed such a powerful message in a few lines was impressive. Well, crafted and insightful!
I particularly appreciate how you brought attention to a relevant issue, reminding us of the value of originality in a world that is increasingly influenced by technology. The brevity of the poem worked in its favor, delivering the message with impact without over complicating it. Your choice of words was simple yet effective, making the poem accessible, while still, encouraging deeper thought. Overall, it was a great read, and a reminder to always stay grounded in our own creativity.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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I enjoyed your poem! Nicely done. It offers a thought provoking perspective, especially with the lines " your talent's unknown/ if you don't think on your own," which highlight the importance of independent thought and creativity. The message about being careful when in the AI zone is both timely and intriguing, urging readers to stay true to their own voice while navigating the digital world. The flow of the poem was smooth, and the way you conveyed such a powerful message in a few lines was impressive. Well, crafted and insightful!
I particularly appreciate how you brought attention to a relevant issue, reminding us of the value of originality in a world that is increasingly influenced by technology. The brevity of the poem worked in its favor, delivering the message with impact without over complicating it. Your choice of words was simple yet effective, making the poem accessible, while still, encouraging deeper thought. Overall, it was a great read, and a reminder to always stay grounded in our own creativity.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Jacquelyn, I thank you for your very kind comments regarding my AI poem.
I wrote this because I fear for our youth. I appreciated your opinion dearly
Comment from June Sargent
Got that right! Use it or lose it - your brain, that is. Technology should enhance - not replace. The less we are willing to do, the more we will lose - our freedom to choose.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Got that right! Use it or lose it - your brain, that is. Technology should enhance - not replace. The less we are willing to do, the more we will lose - our freedom to choose.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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June, I thank you for your very kind comments regarding my AI poem.
I fear for our youth. I appreciated your opinion dearly.
Comment from Kirsten Shonle
Yes, AI might end up taking over all of our jobs. At least it can't take talent away. This was an enjoyable read considering how few syllables was used. It is always hard to write a full poem when it is so short. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Yes, AI might end up taking over all of our jobs. At least it can't take talent away. This was an enjoyable read considering how few syllables was used. It is always hard to write a full poem when it is so short. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Kristen, thank you for your very kind comments regarding my AI poem. I appreciated them dearly.
Yes, you are so right that it can't take talent away from us.
It is like I said in my poem though, that our talent's will be unknown if we don't think on our own and start to rely too heavily on AI. For many it will be an addiction. That is what scares me the most for our kids and grandkids. I pray many will continue to do most of their own thinking.
Thank you again, so very much.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork, did you create it?
-Nice presentation, as well.
-You wrote a very good poem
with a good topic and rhyme.
-You make a good point about talent
and thinking on your own. It is
important to do that.
-You also make a good point
in your concluding line that
links ideas together if you
don't think for yourself.
-A good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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-Great artwork, did you create it?
-Nice presentation, as well.
-You wrote a very good poem
with a good topic and rhyme.
-You make a good point about talent
and thinking on your own. It is
important to do that.
-You also make a good point
in your concluding line that
links ideas together if you
don't think for yourself.
-A good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Pam, thank you for your very kind comments regarding my AI poem. I appreciated them dearly.
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You are very welcome and I appreciate your reply.
