Willing Hearts
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Comment from Begin Again
It really shines a spotlight on Noah, changing him from the all-business guy into one who realizes how important family life and relationships are. It's very moving and romantic. I enjoyed the chapter very much.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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It really shines a spotlight on Noah, changing him from the all-business guy into one who realizes how important family life and relationships are. It's very moving and romantic. I enjoyed the chapter very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the understanding and the support.
Comment from royowen
It's a good man that decides that personal relationships come before oneself. It's amazing how we can't see that, and allow the cares and worries of this world take over and really destroy the foundations of our real desires, I think you've highlight these things so well, well done Barbara, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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It's a good man that decides that personal relationships come before oneself. It's amazing how we can't see that, and allow the cares and worries of this world take over and really destroy the foundations of our real desires, I think you've highlight these things so well, well done Barbara, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the understanding and the support.
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Most welcome
Comment from estory
This is a chapter in which we see Noah getting aquainted with Sami's family and their habits, and we see him fitting in quite comfortably. You illustrate this with how he plays ball with the kid who gets outside of the restaurant, and how he respectfully sits with the family in church. Her family tells her he is a keeper. It's low intensity, light on action maybe, but it has a warm feel to it. estory
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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This is a chapter in which we see Noah getting aquainted with Sami's family and their habits, and we see him fitting in quite comfortably. You illustrate this with how he plays ball with the kid who gets outside of the restaurant, and how he respectfully sits with the family in church. Her family tells her he is a keeper. It's low intensity, light on action maybe, but it has a warm feel to it. estory
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the understanding and kind review.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Barbara,
This is a great love story. Sami and Noah are perfect for each other and he will make a good dad someday.
This book is well organized and written. If flows nicely.
Great job my friend
Cecilia
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Barbara,
This is a great love story. Sami and Noah are perfect for each other and he will make a good dad someday.
This book is well organized and written. If flows nicely.
Great job my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the understanding and kind review.
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You're welcome
Comment from Jacob1395
That was a lovely scene with Sami and Noah visiting Sam's family and it seems as though they really like Noah. Another excellent, engaging chapter, Barbara. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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That was a lovely scene with Sami and Noah visiting Sam's family and it seems as though they really like Noah. Another excellent, engaging chapter, Barbara. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the understanding and kind review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Nice resolution: "John, Sami's dad, walked to the head of a long table. "Noah, I'm glad you could make it. Let's all welcome Noah. I have suspicion he's going to be a permanent fixture at our table. It warms my heart that our family keeps growing." He took a sip of water. "Everybody, take your seats." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Nice resolution: "John, Sami's dad, walked to the head of a long table. "Noah, I'm glad you could make it. Let's all welcome Noah. I have suspicion he's going to be a permanent fixture at our table. It warms my heart that our family keeps growing." He took a sip of water. "Everybody, take your seats." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the understanding and kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
Things seem to be progressing smoothly, and it's good that her family accept him so readily, and also that he is interested in attending church, which I think would be quite important for Sami Well done, sounds like the conclusion is next (a weddding?).
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Things seem to be progressing smoothly, and it's good that her family accept him so readily, and also that he is interested in attending church, which I think would be quite important for Sami Well done, sounds like the conclusion is next (a weddding?).
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the understanding and kind review.
Comment from nomi338
I really love these characters, I love their relationship, their motivations. I love just about everything about them. Having to rely on my memories of the relationship I had with my wife, it gets quite a bit lonely at time, especially times when we would share conversations about friends, our kids, and their kids. Just things in general. Thank you for this wonderful story and these great characters.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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I really love these characters, I love their relationship, their motivations. I love just about everything about them. Having to rely on my memories of the relationship I had with my wife, it gets quite a bit lonely at time, especially times when we would share conversations about friends, our kids, and their kids. Just things in general. Thank you for this wonderful story and these great characters.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the understanding and kind review. I do have a question. Did you mean to give me four stars??
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Oh my God no. I meant to give you six. I will go to the post and fix that mistake immediately. I apologize for the mistake. Your work has always rated very highly with me. If I ever make that mistake again, please do not hesitate to notify me.
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I have that problem too. I guess my finger slips. Thank you.
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Unfortunately when I went in to make the change I only had five stars available. I am so sorry for the mistake. Please forgive me.
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If you don't give a six immediately, it'll never let you go back and give it. I've had that problem before. Not a problem. Your support is all I need.
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Thank you for understanding and for accepting my apology.
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HUGS!!!
Comment from Sankey
You continue to amaze me with all your angles. Still a great read and guess what? NO SPAGS this time around. Make sure I get notified I don't know how I missed the last chapter.
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You continue to amaze me with all your angles. Still a great read and guess what? NO SPAGS this time around. Make sure I get notified I don't know how I missed the last chapter.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the understanding and kind review.
Comment from jim vecchio
I'm glad I returned from the hospital in time for two more chapters. After the next one, I'll be itching for more from you. Glad you're already prepared. I hardly know what I'll post from day to day.
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I'm glad I returned from the hospital in time for two more chapters. After the next one, I'll be itching for more from you. Glad you're already prepared. I hardly know what I'll post from day to day.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the understanding and kind review. I'm happy you're doing well. Prayers do come true.
