Comment from
ESOSTINE
Hi June, this a well composed poem, beautifully presented with pace that flows like a song. You showed your creativity here with sentiment boldly expressed. Well done, dear, and thanks for sharing your inspiration.
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
Comment from
shelley kaye
ooh this was a great jueju poem of longing for someone to return
smooth flow and rhyme and good line connection
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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