Comment from
Pam Lonsdale
I really like the line: When Jesus came my way, turned blue my skies of grey. Just the rearrangement of words that would be said in a different order if not part of a song or poem. It's catchy.
Thank you for sharing some of your lyrics with us today. Do you perform any of your music in church?
xo
Pam
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Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
Thanks Pam, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from
lyenochka
That is such an encouragement for us that our awesome God can never change and He is the same yesterday, today, and forever! Appreciate you sharing this song, Roy!
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Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
Thanks Helen, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy