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Lump of clay in his hands

the cherita poem

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Creating something beautiful from a lump of clay is like giving life with our own hands, and I enjoyed your subtle words here explaining the process of creating this lovely sculpture, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
    Thank you very much for stopping by..
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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I suspect one should be admired for making much from so little like haikus and whatever other form is used, but for the most part I rarely take a meaning from what is written. THis one is an exception. Well done.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Sanku,

This is a great poem. It tells the story of a potter molding a piece of art. I like the line, "The hands gave it shape" The poem is well organized and flows quite nicely.

Well done

Cecilia

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 Comment Written 22-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
    Thank you very much..
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 27-Dec-2024
    You're welcome