Not for prophet
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Comment from Begin Again
How true--or at least I hope I do the same! I know that my ability to write comes from the Lord, and I am blessed. I pray that I do Him justice by writing and sharing my work to bring pleasure to others. I loved the poem!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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How true--or at least I hope I do the same! I know that my ability to write comes from the Lord, and I am blessed. I pray that I do Him justice by writing and sharing my work to bring pleasure to others. I loved the poem!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thanks Carol , for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from patcelaw
This is well written and it was a joy to listen to. You're writing all your has been fantastic. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I also wish you a very good weekend. May God bless you and merry Christmas. Patricia.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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This is well written and it was a joy to listen to. You're writing all your has been fantastic. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I also wish you a very good weekend. May God bless you and merry Christmas. Patricia.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thanks Pat, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from jaded831
I love it. Your poem expresses the truth, stay humble. You can make all the money in the world, we all need to give back. That warm feeling you get from giving makes everything worthwhile.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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I love it. Your poem expresses the truth, stay humble. You can make all the money in the world, we all need to give back. That warm feeling you get from giving makes everything worthwhile.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thanks, for these terrific comments and super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your quatern is beautifully composed and conveys a powerful message of faith, purpose, and humility. The refrain, "I write in sunshine, sleet or rain," anchors the poem and underscores the steadfast dedication to your craft and faith, regardless of external circumstances.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Your quatern is beautifully composed and conveys a powerful message of faith, purpose, and humility. The refrain, "I write in sunshine, sleet or rain," anchors the poem and underscores the steadfast dedication to your craft and faith, regardless of external circumstances.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thanks Peter, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy
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Take care Roy and keep writing
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Comment from lyenochka
Amen! I like your pun in "prophet" for "profit". I do think we should always write for the Lord's glory. In any art, it's so easy to be tempted by ambition, fame, or simply wanting to please our audience. Great quatern poem for us writers!
write in sunshine, sleet or rain, (the first line is missing the pronoun "I")
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Amen! I like your pun in "prophet" for "profit". I do think we should always write for the Lord's glory. In any art, it's so easy to be tempted by ambition, fame, or simply wanting to please our audience. Great quatern poem for us writers!
write in sunshine, sleet or rain, (the first line is missing the pronoun "I")
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thanks Helen, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is an well-written poem that uses rhyme and meter. Thank you for the author notes on the form. Favorite lines: I write in sunshine, sleet or rain,
in God I trust, my heart's refrain.
I was wondering, did you mean to title it: Not for Profit instead of Not for prophet?
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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This is an well-written poem that uses rhyme and meter. Thank you for the author notes on the form. Favorite lines: I write in sunshine, sleet or rain,
in God I trust, my heart's refrain.
I was wondering, did you mean to title it: Not for Profit instead of Not for prophet?
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thanks Crystie, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
