Willing Hearts
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Comment from Jacob1395
I loved this conversation between Sami and Noah, you can tell how much she wants their relationship to work and how much she loves Noah. A well written piece, Barbara, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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I loved this conversation between Sami and Noah, you can tell how much she wants their relationship to work and how much she loves Noah. A well written piece, Barbara, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Sankey
This was a lovely, meandering kind of chapter. You did well, I am guessing we must be nearing the end of all this. Such a varying story full of adventure, love, romance and lessons in family history. Keep it all coming, still great reading and guessing where it is heading. No spags today.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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This was a lovely, meandering kind of chapter. You did well, I am guessing we must be nearing the end of all this. Such a varying story full of adventure, love, romance and lessons in family history. Keep it all coming, still great reading and guessing where it is heading. No spags today.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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We are very close to the end. Just tying up loose ends. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
I am so suspicious. I saw the last line about Noah having to check out his place and I thought. " Oh my goodness, he's married!"
Ha! Why would my mind go there. Anyhoo, another awesome chapter. That Jasper is one spoiled dog!
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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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I am so suspicious. I saw the last line about Noah having to check out his place and I thought. " Oh my goodness, he's married!"
Ha! Why would my mind go there. Anyhoo, another awesome chapter. That Jasper is one spoiled dog!
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Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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LOL Sami does get an eye full and just might end things. Will be reveled next week. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
A fine chapter, filled with romance, and theirs is moving on in leaps and bounds. Her grandparents' story is moving, and I hope Noah can be as strong and steadfast as her grandfather. His background and work are very different and they mould his character and personality. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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A fine chapter, filled with romance, and theirs is moving on in leaps and bounds. Her grandparents' story is moving, and I hope Noah can be as strong and steadfast as her grandfather. His background and work are very different and they mould his character and personality. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from forestport12
You remind of why I fell in love with Hemingway! His book weren't thick, but he also wrote with a lot of white spaces. He'd use dialogue to engage the reader like you do too! I like the plot about trafficking, but at the same time you keep a romance or a love aspect going throughout.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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You remind of why I fell in love with Hemingway! His book weren't thick, but he also wrote with a lot of white spaces. He'd use dialogue to engage the reader like you do too! I like the plot about trafficking, but at the same time you keep a romance or a love aspect going throughout.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Begin Again
Sami's story about her grandmother and her grandfather is very touching. They faced hard times, were willing to wait as expected, and their love grew slowly. Exactly what Sami wants as well. Their relationship is blossoming and they are getting closer and understanding each other one step at a time.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Sami's story about her grandmother and her grandfather is very touching. They faced hard times, were willing to wait as expected, and their love grew slowly. Exactly what Sami wants as well. Their relationship is blossoming and they are getting closer and understanding each other one step at a time.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from patcelaw
This is very little and it flows very well when it is read aloud I wish you the very best with your writing. You're set the structure and your paragraphing are all well done and it makes it for an excellent read along. Patricia.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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This is very little and it flows very well when it is read aloud I wish you the very best with your writing. You're set the structure and your paragraphing are all well done and it makes it for an excellent read along. Patricia.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
They did have a lovely day together and evening as well. Noah knows a lot about her family, but she still knows little about his, or if he has one. I think the idea of a real date is also a good idea.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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They did have a lovely day together and evening as well. Noah knows a lot about her family, but she still knows little about his, or if he has one. I think the idea of a real date is also a good idea.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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He grew up in an orphanage, there's not a lot to know. Thank you for the kind review.
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Has he told her that yet?
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Yes, way back at the beginning of the novel.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, again a very good chapter. Noah and Sami spent some good time together, but some doubts still.creep into Sami's mind. I think she can trust Noah, though. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Hi Barbara, again a very good chapter. Noah and Sami spent some good time together, but some doubts still.creep into Sami's mind. I think she can trust Noah, though. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. She can, but still needs to work that out.
Comment from lancellot
A very story told within your larger story. Noah is behaving just as the author likes her knights to be, and the romance leading to marriage is moving at the pace and way the fan base prefers. No issues seen. I would only caution about a drawn-out conclusion to any story.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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A very story told within your larger story. Noah is behaving just as the author likes her knights to be, and the romance leading to marriage is moving at the pace and way the fan base prefers. No issues seen. I would only caution about a drawn-out conclusion to any story.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.