Miracles
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Comment from Carol Clark2
You're neatly trimming and tying most all the edges of the plot in this chapter. The diamonds have been found and Frank puts them to a good purpose. Rossi has been arrested. Question: Garth puts handcuffs on him, and Rossi is led out of the room. But Garth is still sitting there with Eleanor. Who leads Rossi out? An interesting chapter! Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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You're neatly trimming and tying most all the edges of the plot in this chapter. The diamonds have been found and Frank puts them to a good purpose. Rossi has been arrested. Question: Garth puts handcuffs on him, and Rossi is led out of the room. But Garth is still sitting there with Eleanor. Who leads Rossi out? An interesting chapter! Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Another fantastic chapter. It is moving right along. Now I'm wondering how you are going to twist this and what happens next. You are a superstar to bust out a book in 30 days.
Well done my friend
Cecilia xoxo
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Carol,
Another fantastic chapter. It is moving right along. Now I'm wondering how you are going to twist this and what happens next. You are a superstar to bust out a book in 30 days.
Well done my friend
Cecilia xoxo
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
As usual, I thoroughly enjoyed all the action, emotions, and dialogue. I appreciate all the background detail you incorporate into each chapter as your characters interact with one another. Vince's lips curled, Eleanor's gaze lingered, Rossi's jaw tightened, Frankie cleared his throat, Eleanor gasped. All of these expressions att to the reader's ability to visualize.
One little nit:
"Relax, Vince. It's going to all over in nothing flat." (all be over)
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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As usual, I thoroughly enjoyed all the action, emotions, and dialogue. I appreciate all the background detail you incorporate into each chapter as your characters interact with one another. Vince's lips curled, Eleanor's gaze lingered, Rossi's jaw tightened, Frankie cleared his throat, Eleanor gasped. All of these expressions att to the reader's ability to visualize.
One little nit:
"Relax, Vince. It's going to all over in nothing flat." (all be over)
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
"To new beginnings." Now we've always heard that saying before, but in most cases it means most anything that new beginnings are on their way.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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"To new beginnings." Now we've always heard that saying before, but in most cases it means most anything that new beginnings are on their way.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww, Carol, had I got a six left it would have been all yours, and well deserved to. This was a fabulous chapter, I was holding my breath in several places. It was amazing. The ending with Jack giving Eleanor that diamond, well that was classic, amazing, wonderful. I loved this chapter. Everyone got what they wanted. Now we need to get Matthew's memory back, and his anger and distrust that Jenna was a traitor, you have to get that sorted to, so the baby has a loving mum and dad! Well done, my amazing author friend. Love you lots. :))Sandra xxx
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Aww, Carol, had I got a six left it would have been all yours, and well deserved to. This was a fabulous chapter, I was holding my breath in several places. It was amazing. The ending with Jack giving Eleanor that diamond, well that was classic, amazing, wonderful. I loved this chapter. Everyone got what they wanted. Now we need to get Matthew's memory back, and his anger and distrust that Jenna was a traitor, you have to get that sorted to, so the baby has a loving mum and dad! Well done, my amazing author friend. Love you lots. :))Sandra xxx
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We're almost at the end. All we need now is for Matthew to get his memory back and him, Jenna, and their baby girl together.
Jack raised his hand to silence them, and then he continued. "Vince and I are going inside (continued,)
Vince could feel the sweat running down his back. as Jack slapped him on the shoulder. (back,)
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We're almost at the end. All we need now is for Matthew to get his memory back and him, Jenna, and their baby girl together.
Jack raised his hand to silence them, and then he continued. "Vince and I are going inside (continued,)
Vince could feel the sweat running down his back. as Jack slapped him on the shoulder. (back,)
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol