Miracles
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Comment from Jacob1395
Now you've left me on tenterhooks waiting to find out what's going to happen to Jenna next. I could feel her anger towards her mother when she found out Eleanor knew where Matthew was and hadn't told her, but I wonder how she'll take the news that he has no memory of his life before the accident. A well written chapter, Carol, I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Now you've left me on tenterhooks waiting to find out what's going to happen to Jenna next. I could feel her anger towards her mother when she found out Eleanor knew where Matthew was and hadn't told her, but I wonder how she'll take the news that he has no memory of his life before the accident. A well written chapter, Carol, I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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thanks for enjoying my efforts. It's been a fun story to write.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
As she passed through the parking lot, she was about to tell Garth about what she'd discovered inside, but when she heard his conversation with Frank, she decided Jenna needed to be told by her and not Garth. With a firm resolve, she made her decision and left. (Yes, and NO! Yes, Eleanor needs to tell Jenna and right away, but first she needs to tell Garth about the armoire and the men hiding down there. Eleanor would not leave without telling Garth.)
We still don't know if the baby is from the rape or Matthew's. I can't wait to read more.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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As she passed through the parking lot, she was about to tell Garth about what she'd discovered inside, but when she heard his conversation with Frank, she decided Jenna needed to be told by her and not Garth. With a firm resolve, she made her decision and left. (Yes, and NO! Yes, Eleanor needs to tell Jenna and right away, but first she needs to tell Garth about the armoire and the men hiding down there. Eleanor would not leave without telling Garth.)
We still don't know if the baby is from the rape or Matthew's. I can't wait to read more.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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thanks for enjoying my efforts. It's been a fun story to write.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
As with most people, we are too slow at making our decisions, either that, so we make snap decisions without thinking things over enough before acting. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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As with most people, we are too slow at making our decisions, either that, so we make snap decisions without thinking things over enough before acting. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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thanks for enjoying my efforts. It's been a fun story to write.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I've gone all cold, Eleanor is sitting here with me. I can't imagine where this is going now, does the baby live? And Jenna and Rebecca, they have to live, so does Matthew!!!! My goodness, Carol, all the good guys are dying and those that caused it are getting away! I hope Garth's team get to that Rossi soon, and give him a good once over before they kill him! I hope the next chapter is ready? This is such a fabulous chapter, my heart is really thumping! Love you lots, but that might change if Jenna and Rebecca die!!!! LOL. xxxxx Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I've gone all cold, Eleanor is sitting here with me. I can't imagine where this is going now, does the baby live? And Jenna and Rebecca, they have to live, so does Matthew!!!! My goodness, Carol, all the good guys are dying and those that caused it are getting away! I hope Garth's team get to that Rossi soon, and give him a good once over before they kill him! I hope the next chapter is ready? This is such a fabulous chapter, my heart is really thumping! Love you lots, but that might change if Jenna and Rebecca die!!!! LOL. xxxxx Sandra xxx
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much Sandra for the six and the awesome review, I am closing in on these reviews. It got close to 300 but I'm down to 22. Hurrah for me!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really felt the tension in this chapter! The way you captured Jenna's desperation had me hooked. I especially liked the moments where they were showing their love for each other. Like when Jenna refuses to be stopped. The way you build suspense with the car chase and crash was intense and made me want to keep reading to see what happens next. I can't wait to see where this story goes from here! Keep it up!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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I really felt the tension in this chapter! The way you captured Jenna's desperation had me hooked. I especially liked the moments where they were showing their love for each other. Like when Jenna refuses to be stopped. The way you build suspense with the car chase and crash was intense and made me want to keep reading to see what happens next. I can't wait to see where this story goes from here! Keep it up!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Good morning! Thanks for enjoying the story. I appreciate your time and kindness. Writing a novel in a month is becoming a "hectic" chore. (Especially with holidays and a vacation).
Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Another awesome chapter of the book my friend. It is coming along quite nicely. You ramped up the excitement and left me hang again. That is a great talent. You are such an awesome author. This book is going to be a #1 best seller.
We have to figure out how to get your first book marketed. Have you come up with any ideas? There should be a lot of information on line I would think.
Bravo my friend
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Carol,
Another awesome chapter of the book my friend. It is coming along quite nicely. You ramped up the excitement and left me hang again. That is a great talent. You are such an awesome author. This book is going to be a #1 best seller.
We have to figure out how to get your first book marketed. Have you come up with any ideas? There should be a lot of information on line I would think.
Bravo my friend
Cecilia
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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thanks for enjoying my efforts. It's been a fun story to write.
Smiles, Carol
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Carol,
You're welcome. It's been a fun story to read. I really am enjoying it.
Cecilia
Comment from Tim Margetts
Damn it woman, what the fekk are you doing to me, dumping this on my lap.
Arrrrrgh
OK deep breath.
Now go get the a**holes before I have to!
Oops, and give the little ones a big hug too
Tim x
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Damn it woman, what the fekk are you doing to me, dumping this on my lap.
Arrrrrgh
OK deep breath.
Now go get the a**holes before I have to!
Oops, and give the little ones a big hug too
Tim x
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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thanks for enjoying my efforts. It's been a fun story to write.
Smiles, Carol