Miracles
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Are you typing all night and watching little girls by day? You are amazing. This is a great change in the story. Eleanor got Jason involved and he convinced his son to do the right thing. Also, it's great to know Crystal has been saved.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Are you typing all night and watching little girls by day? You are amazing. This is a great change in the story. Eleanor got Jason involved and he convinced his son to do the right thing. Also, it's great to know Crystal has been saved.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks for taking the time to read and hopefully enjoy this chapter. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
I guess Eleanor is finding new strength as a ghost not only taking down bad guys with trees but also transporting live humans to different places and transfiguring them so that they came give a more convincing message. Glad that the DeLucas had a good chat!
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I guess Eleanor is finding new strength as a ghost not only taking down bad guys with trees but also transporting live humans to different places and transfiguring them so that they came give a more convincing message. Glad that the DeLucas had a good chat!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks for taking the time to read and hopefully enjoy this chapter. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Eleanor is certainly in charge here tonight! She's doing all sorts of ghostly things. I'm glad she had Jason talk some sense into his son. I hope she can hold her own against Bruiser, or maybe Garth will show up to help her out.
Great chapter! Hugs! Carol
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Eleanor is certainly in charge here tonight! She's doing all sorts of ghostly things. I'm glad she had Jason talk some sense into his son. I hope she can hold her own against Bruiser, or maybe Garth will show up to help her out.
Great chapter! Hugs! Carol
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks for taking the time to read and hopefully enjoy this chapter. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
I enjoyed the unexpected nursing home scene with Jason Deluca falling asleep watching the baseball game. You give readers a lot of emotion and reality to envision. You include scenes readers can identify with and visualize.
Eleanor's fight with Bruiser was incredible. I love it when a ghost does ghostly things to traumatize the bad guys.
Thanks for introducing me to all of these realistic characters. I feel like I personally know them.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I enjoyed the unexpected nursing home scene with Jason Deluca falling asleep watching the baseball game. You give readers a lot of emotion and reality to envision. You include scenes readers can identify with and visualize.
Eleanor's fight with Bruiser was incredible. I love it when a ghost does ghostly things to traumatize the bad guys.
Thanks for introducing me to all of these realistic characters. I feel like I personally know them.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks for taking the time to read and hopefully enjoy this chapter. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
I enjoy every sentence and wouldn't want to miss a word of your story, but you write and post faster than, I can possibly read and keep up without dropping about half of those on my fan list. LOL.
Thanks for sharing and I hope you're having a great time!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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I enjoy every sentence and wouldn't want to miss a word of your story, but you write and post faster than, I can possibly read and keep up without dropping about half of those on my fan list. LOL.
Thanks for sharing and I hope you're having a great time!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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I wouldn't be posting so much if it wasn't for this contest. The story is suppose to be done by the 30th...eight more days. Than I can ease up till next year. But I thank you for reading when you can. Always appreciated.
Smiles, Carol
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I've kept up so far. LOL. But I've had a scratch off a few others. :-)
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I'm blessed and thankful that you have stayed with the story and me, but I'm sorry it takes up so much of your time. I should never have chosen it for the contest and thought I could miraculously fit it into thirty days....and then go on a trip. Crazy! That's me! But I do so appreciate YOU! Hugs, Carol
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Oh, I wasn't complaining, or meaning to sound like it. I thought I was being humorous. Kind of like a kid on a leash trying to keep up. The parent's stride being triple my own, and with every step, I'm snatched along. Hope you're having a fantastic visit! Ric
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I know you would never be mean to me and complaining wouldn't do much good. LOL I just hope I can get it finished. It's going to be a tough job if I want to get everything in that I want. Might have to have some long chapters. Thanks for being on my fan list!!!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Wow! Brilliant, I hope I can be an Eleanor, after I've passed over. What fun she has. Things are really starting to fall in place, people will soon be getting their comeuppance, and a good job too. But, what will the team do to Doyle? They have to stop him, take away his power. Well done, my clever friend. You are going to do it. 8 days left!!!! :)) Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Wow! Brilliant, I hope I can be an Eleanor, after I've passed over. What fun she has. Things are really starting to fall in place, people will soon be getting their comeuppance, and a good job too. But, what will the team do to Doyle? They have to stop him, take away his power. Well done, my clever friend. You are going to do it. 8 days left!!!! :)) Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Wouldnt it be awesome to be Eleanor...I know I think it would be great. I think I have it planned out but time is running short to get all this in and still read to get $$ to post. If I don't finish it's no great deal because I doubt I will win anyhow. Thanks so much for reading and liking it as usual. Love ya, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
Who you gonna call?
Ghost Detectives.
They definitely have some big advantages going for them, pity they cant use evidence heard while being ghostly in a court.
But there are other ways.
This is building up nicely Carol.
Tim x
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Who you gonna call?
Ghost Detectives.
They definitely have some big advantages going for them, pity they cant use evidence heard while being ghostly in a court.
But there are other ways.
This is building up nicely Carol.
Tim x
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks for taking the time to read and hopefully enjoy this chapter. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Another fine chapter in the book of miracles. You have been truly blessed to be able to write like you do. You are a superstar my friend. I'm waiting with bated breath for the next chapter.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Carol,
Another fine chapter in the book of miracles. You have been truly blessed to be able to write like you do. You are a superstar my friend. I'm waiting with bated breath for the next chapter.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks for taking the time to read and hopefully enjoy this chapter. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I do hope Garth and the boys come to Eleanor's aid. I also hope Crystal shares everything she heard inside. This is a good write.
Garth chuckled, "He's acting like a rooster in a hen house." (chuckled.)
"Joey's about to make the biggest mistake of his life." Eleanor offered, her tone was serious. (life, & after offered;)
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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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I do hope Garth and the boys come to Eleanor's aid. I also hope Crystal shares everything she heard inside. This is a good write.
Garth chuckled, "He's acting like a rooster in a hen house." (chuckled.)
"Joey's about to make the biggest mistake of his life." Eleanor offered, her tone was serious. (life, & after offered;)
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Hurrah! I've finally went back and corrected everything and I am so thankful for your help and that I am actually done....for now. Thanks again, Barbara.
Smiles, Carol