Miracles
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Comment from Carol Clark2
Wow, Donatelli is on his way to a hospital and Danni has figured out most of what's going on with this crime ring. Then she rescued Crystal. Now that she has seen his watch, she can piece together the pieces of what's happened to Donatelli. Garth has kind of taken a back seat in all of this, letting his team and Danni collect the clues. Good chapter! Have a blessed weekend. Carol
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Wow, Donatelli is on his way to a hospital and Danni has figured out most of what's going on with this crime ring. Then she rescued Crystal. Now that she has seen his watch, she can piece together the pieces of what's happened to Donatelli. Garth has kind of taken a back seat in all of this, letting his team and Danni collect the clues. Good chapter! Have a blessed weekend. Carol
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
The guys in the bar are NOT working for Doyle? I thought they were. This is probably what happens when you miss a chapter here and there - and a whole book!
I am enjoying this, Carol, and rooting for the women!
xo
Pam
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The guys in the bar are NOT working for Doyle? I thought they were. This is probably what happens when you miss a chapter here and there - and a whole book!
I am enjoying this, Carol, and rooting for the women!
xo
Pam
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Tim Margetts
Yay woot, the plot unfolds, but still with so many questions.
You go girl. If they can really secure Crystal plus gather evidence of the scam going down...
Personally I would be on the radio getting a swat team there to hit the place.
But I am not the author LOL
Great Chapter Carol x
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Yay woot, the plot unfolds, but still with so many questions.
You go girl. If they can really secure Crystal plus gather evidence of the scam going down...
Personally I would be on the radio getting a swat team there to hit the place.
But I am not the author LOL
Great Chapter Carol x
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
The plot thickens I love it. I wonder what you got up your sleeve next as the tension builds. You my friend have been Blessed to be able to put pen to paper.
I'm so dumb. I was reading your book last night and I was confused how Donatelli was upright and healthy. Then it dawned on me it was a different book vs this one. I need to keep it together. ha,ha.
Wonderful job on this chapter.
Cecilia
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Carol,
The plot thickens I love it. I wonder what you got up your sleeve next as the tension builds. You my friend have been Blessed to be able to put pen to paper.
I'm so dumb. I was reading your book last night and I was confused how Donatelli was upright and healthy. Then it dawned on me it was a different book vs this one. I need to keep it together. ha,ha.
Wonderful job on this chapter.
Cecilia
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
She has said the words that prove Matthew wasn't the murderer of the other man in the boot. (trunk? I can't remember what you call it in America.)
Not only can she prove what happened, Matthew is safe, at last, in the safe hands of Frank, a criminal with a heart of gold. (when it comes to Eleanor)
Now she has to tell the others what's going on. And Garth can't moan at her, he never gave her a chance to tell him when she tried. This is speeding up nicely, Carol, fast but not too fast that it makes it rushed in the story sense. Well done, my friend. Love you lots, Sandra xxx
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She has said the words that prove Matthew wasn't the murderer of the other man in the boot. (trunk? I can't remember what you call it in America.)
Not only can she prove what happened, Matthew is safe, at last, in the safe hands of Frank, a criminal with a heart of gold. (when it comes to Eleanor)
Now she has to tell the others what's going on. And Garth can't moan at her, he never gave her a chance to tell him when she tried. This is speeding up nicely, Carol, fast but not too fast that it makes it rushed in the story sense. Well done, my friend. Love you lots, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Wendy G
Excellent chapter, full of action. Let's hope they can keep Crystal safe and that she can give them the information she has ovrheard. Very well written. Dramatic and fast-paced.
Wendy
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Excellent chapter, full of action. Let's hope they can keep Crystal safe and that she can give them the information she has ovrheard. Very well written. Dramatic and fast-paced.
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from lyenochka
A lot of progress here. Donatelli is safe and on the way to healing. Danni has found a key witness and hopefully can get Crystal to a safe place. And the team doesn't have to wait anymore with the information found!
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A lot of progress here. Donatelli is safe and on the way to healing. Danni has found a key witness and hopefully can get Crystal to a safe place. And the team doesn't have to wait anymore with the information found!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Danni is on the job getting the info Garth needs. Crystal is lucky to still be alive, working in a den of thieves and worse. Maybe Donatelli's watch won't be the only thing she gives them.
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Danni is on the job getting the info Garth needs. Crystal is lucky to still be alive, working in a den of thieves and worse. Maybe Donatelli's watch won't be the only thing she gives them.
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
Comment from Rick Gardner
Very interesting and well written, draws you into the action and has good character development, will anxiously wait for more, just a little at a time,
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Very interesting and well written, draws you into the action and has good character development, will anxiously wait for more, just a little at a time,
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024