Scarred children.
A poem.41 total reviews
Comment from TPAC
Super conveyance, touching words pounding repeated truth within my heart: absorbing this deep message to humanity. I wonder if anyone else is listening? Great read, in my given viewpoint.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Super conveyance, touching words pounding repeated truth within my heart: absorbing this deep message to humanity. I wonder if anyone else is listening? Great read, in my given viewpoint.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thanks for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from shad blunt
spoken true, spoken with wisdom from someone that has experienced life through another perspective of looking forward to see our children live freely to experience life. On life's terms. Thank you sharing your words, I am proud father of 2 beautiful boys that I want them to achieve all to be the best for this world to see. Looking forward to reading more of your work
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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spoken true, spoken with wisdom from someone that has experienced life through another perspective of looking forward to see our children live freely to experience life. On life's terms. Thank you sharing your words, I am proud father of 2 beautiful boys that I want them to achieve all to be the best for this world to see. Looking forward to reading more of your work
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thanks for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sanku
My parents generation never bothered about their children emotional well beings. They clothed us,fd us and protected us form danger .But they never put much thinking in their dealings.. In the guise of being strict ,my mother often would say hurtful things.. This is true of many of my cousins friends etc...I feel this generation of parents is much better .
very thought provoking poem Roy..
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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My parents generation never bothered about their children emotional well beings. They clothed us,fd us and protected us form danger .But they never put much thinking in their dealings.. In the guise of being strict ,my mother often would say hurtful things.. This is true of many of my cousins friends etc...I feel this generation of parents is much better .
very thought provoking poem Roy..
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thanks Santha, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Aussie
Children can be abused emotionally from childhood. As they learn from adults, it can be destructive to their lives later on. For what they thought right, was wrong. Anger fumes when they realise the adults have showed them the wrong path for life. As children we needed learning and guiding on the path to our Maker. Kxx
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Children can be abused emotionally from childhood. As they learn from adults, it can be destructive to their lives later on. For what they thought right, was wrong. Anger fumes when they realise the adults have showed them the wrong path for life. As children we needed learning and guiding on the path to our Maker. Kxx
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thanks Kay, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for this great reminder. I keep having to tell my grandchildren not to scar each other with terrible words toward each other. I hope I can impress on them that they are loved by the Lord and worthy because He loves them. They don't get that kind of teaching at home. You have taught your daughters well so that they are raising a wonderful generation, godly and strong!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thanks for this great reminder. I keep having to tell my grandchildren not to scar each other with terrible words toward each other. I hope I can impress on them that they are loved by the Lord and worthy because He loves them. They don't get that kind of teaching at home. You have taught your daughters well so that they are raising a wonderful generation, godly and strong!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thanks Helen, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Pearl Edwards
They say the first seven years lay the foundations, and as you say Roy, many children come from decaying and cracked foundations. A very dramatic black and white presentation that goes well with this topic. We'' written, Roy.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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They say the first seven years lay the foundations, and as you say Roy, many children come from decaying and cracked foundations. A very dramatic black and white presentation that goes well with this topic. We'' written, Roy.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thanks Valda, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Colorado Owl
This is such important message! Words are powerful and often leave an indelible mark. Why is it that we so often remember the words that are most hurtful? Thank you, Roy.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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This is such important message! Words are powerful and often leave an indelible mark. Why is it that we so often remember the words that are most hurtful? Thank you, Roy.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thanks for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
We are remembered by our actions by contemporaries. However, by subsequent generations, we are remembered by our children. Children are a treasure from the Lord. What the future knows about us, they learn through our children.
Robert
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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We are remembered by our actions by contemporaries. However, by subsequent generations, we are remembered by our children. Children are a treasure from the Lord. What the future knows about us, they learn through our children.
Robert
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thanks Robert for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
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You're welcome.
Comment from forestport12
What a haunting picture that drew me in. That last stanza was powerful. You find obscure words with such meaning and power. "Hide like lepers in fates holes." "Garments cloaked in blood." We need your gifted voice in broken world.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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What a haunting picture that drew me in. That last stanza was powerful. You find obscure words with such meaning and power. "Hide like lepers in fates holes." "Garments cloaked in blood." We need your gifted voice in broken world.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thanks Stan, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from judiverse
Things that happen to a child can scar his or her life forever. Having to endure school bullies is one problem. Some grow up in homes with abusive parents who may be alcoholics or drug addicts. I have read stories of successful people who have made it despite their poor start in life. All children deserve a good start in life. I like your description of the tormented children hiding in leper's holes. Great rhyme, but why is there a Y after flood in the second stanza? judi
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Things that happen to a child can scar his or her life forever. Having to endure school bullies is one problem. Some grow up in homes with abusive parents who may be alcoholics or drug addicts. I have read stories of successful people who have made it despite their poor start in life. All children deserve a good start in life. I like your description of the tormented children hiding in leper's holes. Great rhyme, but why is there a Y after flood in the second stanza? judi
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thanks Judi, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy