The Staircase
The right path's not always clear, but it doesn't have to be15 total reviews
Comment from ESOSTINE
I enjoyed the flow of this poem, the creativity that leaves readers wondering the spirituality behind the poem. Thanks for sharing your imagination. Well done.
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I enjoyed the flow of this poem, the creativity that leaves readers wondering the spirituality behind the poem. Thanks for sharing your imagination. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from DonandVicki
The Message that I got from your poem is the narrow path to God. Not always the widest, the most clear or well traveled. The line I enjoyed the most was: ""Look here!" Those daffodils exclaim with not eyes but spirit's touch..."
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The Message that I got from your poem is the narrow path to God. Not always the widest, the most clear or well traveled. The line I enjoyed the most was: ""Look here!" Those daffodils exclaim with not eyes but spirit's touch..."
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from lyenochka
Loved this! It makes me think how all of us are "bathed in brokenness" in this world and life on earth, in general. But each step we draw closer to the top of the hill when we've learned love and compassion as He modeled for us. Virtual six!
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Loved this! It makes me think how all of us are "bathed in brokenness" in this world and life on earth, in general. But each step we draw closer to the top of the hill when we've learned love and compassion as He modeled for us. Virtual six!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I enjoyed it the first time, then, after reading your Author's Notes, tried it again and this time I felt the full impact of what lay between the lines. I'm so glad you're back on here, my little Southern Charmer, because you add such a deep and LITERARY presence to the site. This was exceptional...but of course it would be, since that's all you really know how to do.
xoxoxo
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I enjoyed it the first time, then, after reading your Author's Notes, tried it again and this time I felt the full impact of what lay between the lines. I'm so glad you're back on here, my little Southern Charmer, because you add such a deep and LITERARY presence to the site. This was exceptional...but of course it would be, since that's all you really know how to do.
xoxoxo
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Yvonne,
Your poem is so profound. I love your theme
Your last for phrases, starting with, "for 'tis..." are both comforting and in par with living life.
Excellent poem, Yvonne
Best wishes!
Cindy
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Yvonne,
Your poem is so profound. I love your theme
Your last for phrases, starting with, "for 'tis..." are both comforting and in par with living life.
Excellent poem, Yvonne
Best wishes!
Cindy
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2024