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From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
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Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Phew!! That was a chapter and a half, Carol. My heart was thumping a fast and loudly as Margarets! How the hell could John Doyle still be in prison and yet kill Margaret? He must have got someone to do it for him. That would be even more scary. Who else is he after? Loads of people. Garth and Donatelli have to act fast to stop that from happening. Well done, my friend. I'm so pleased to have Eleanor back. Good luck in getting this one finished and won. :)) Sandra xxxx
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
It's going to be a tough one, but at leat I'm off and writing. You were my first review (hurrah!) and of course I am thrilled. After looking at my storyline last night, I've really got a lot to cram into a short time...but I thrive on challenges...just look at my life. LOL I can't wait to see what you think as the story unfolds...lots of twists and turns.
Hope you are doing well.....Thanks for always being there for me.
Smiles, hugs, and lots of love, Carol
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