The Morning After
It's not over until it's over, Girls!24 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Oh Carol, that was another wonderful chapter. Well done to tell the whole story from another point of view - and the horror of Jne Babies" return would be real!!!
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Oh Carol, that was another wonderful chapter. Well done to tell the whole story from another point of view - and the horror of Jne Babies" return would be real!!!
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Hello, Wendy! Ready for another walk with Sunny? LOl thanks for the review. I couldn't put the story to bed yet because I was having so much fun. We should do this more often. It was great to see how everyone's minds worked.
Have a great November!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good heavens, Carol!
You had far too much fun with this posting, and I love it!
The dialogue made sense, read smoothly, but the action is what is hysterical.
And "Jane Baby" has returned?
Tell me it "ain't" so!
Poor Rachelle!
Poor Gretchen!
Poor Everyone!
Too funny!
Thank you for an imaginative and most enjoyable read!
fondly,
diane
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Good heavens, Carol!
You had far too much fun with this posting, and I love it!
The dialogue made sense, read smoothly, but the action is what is hysterical.
And "Jane Baby" has returned?
Tell me it "ain't" so!
Poor Rachelle!
Poor Gretchen!
Poor Everyone!
Too funny!
Thank you for an imaginative and most enjoyable read!
fondly,
diane
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thanks Diane. I was having so much fun that I couldn't stop... but I did get the photos from Grace and Maddy, so nobody should be getting blackmailed. LOL Have a wonderful NOvember!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
What a fabulous story you have working. It gets more interesting with every chapter. You did an awesome job.
Got a stupid question: Does fanstory have a convention? It would be great to meet other authors if they do.
Anyway a great work. Keep them coming.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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What a fabulous story you have working. It gets more interesting with every chapter. You did an awesome job.
Got a stupid question: Does fanstory have a convention? It would be great to meet other authors if they do.
Anyway a great work. Keep them coming.
Cecilia
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Unfortunately, they do not have a convention but woyldn't it be absolutely awesome to meet everyone... even if we could do some kind of a zoom party... I don't know how those things work but I know they had entire classrooms doing it during covid. And it wasn't a stupid question...it was a great idea. Thanks for enjoying the second chapter. I'm done with it now and getting ready to start the new book. Have a great night.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from marilyn quillen
I'd. like to get my hands on that camera! I loved the story it was really adorable, I can't do adorable or cute I always have to have someone chasing someone scaring the crap out of them. Oh well I just wait for your next one because as usual they turn out just perfect, great job again
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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I'd. like to get my hands on that camera! I loved the story it was really adorable, I can't do adorable or cute I always have to have someone chasing someone scaring the crap out of them. Oh well I just wait for your next one because as usual they turn out just perfect, great job again
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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You are so kind! I too usually am writing mystery and crime, but this one was perfect and I had so much fun. Glad you enjoyed it as well. Thank you for the review, your kindness, and the stars. How awesome!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from GWHARGIS
That would be so "Jane Babies" to come back like it's only natural. This was funny and I'm hoping I missed the after party. Sounds traumatic. Lil. This was a fun and unique take. I enjoyed this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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That would be so "Jane Babies" to come back like it's only natural. This was funny and I'm hoping I missed the after party. Sounds traumatic. Lil. This was a fun and unique take. I enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much Gretchen and thanks for giving all of us the opportunity to join your party. It was a blast and I had so much fun...especially when I had to write some more. We should do this more often. Have a great NOvember!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
You never know what's on some of these gals minds or what they might be willing to get into. But I've never one to judge, because I'm sure I'd done worse. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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You never know what's on some of these gals minds or what they might be willing to get into. But I've never one to judge, because I'm sure I'd done worse. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thanks for reading and enjoying my Morning After scenario. I wasn't ready to let the party end.... It was fun! Have a wonderful November!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pam (respa)
The perfect picture for your story, Carol. You did a great job, and it couldn't have been easy following the party. But you begin it with a good premise, "It's our job." I like the line about the "plot twist," very clever, as well as writers and they imaginations. Then Grace has a great comeback about giving her the keys to the convention center.
A great ending, and your descriptive detail is excellent. Very well done.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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The perfect picture for your story, Carol. You did a great job, and it couldn't have been easy following the party. But you begin it with a good premise, "It's our job." I like the line about the "plot twist," very clever, as well as writers and they imaginations. Then Grace has a great comeback about giving her the keys to the convention center.
A great ending, and your descriptive detail is excellent. Very well done.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much for all your kind words and the stars. I feel so blessed but it was so much fun doing this sort of follow up and reading everyones' ideas as well. Thank you.
Smiles, Carol
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You are very welcome, Carol, and I agree it was fun, and now I need to read some of the other versions.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It seems like the saga is continuing here Carol and I loved your post party story here. Your humour and your well written tale made me smile and this event seems to go on and on! Loved your post Carol, very inventive and full of fun, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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It seems like the saga is continuing here Carol and I loved your post party story here. Your humour and your well written tale made me smile and this event seems to go on and on! Loved your post Carol, very inventive and full of fun, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks Dolly...I wasn't quite ready to let all our friends drift away to their computers without having one last "fling" with them. I think this adventure was so much fun and I thank you for enjoying it with me.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I see you continued with Gretchen and Rachelle's story. I love it. Very creative.
Maddy chuckled, "For once, I doubt Chef would be looking at the buffet table." (chuckled.)
Maddy snorted and then lowered her voice as she spoke. "Chef told me he saw her leaving, (spoke,)
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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I see you continued with Gretchen and Rachelle's story. I love it. Very creative.
Maddy chuckled, "For once, I doubt Chef would be looking at the buffet table." (chuckled.)
Maddy snorted and then lowered her voice as she spoke. "Chef told me he saw her leaving, (spoke,)
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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I guess I wasn't ready to let the party end...though I preferred to watch not be in the midst of it. I am pleased that you enjoyed the Morning After Scenario. Have a wonderful November!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Gayla putnam
So clever to tell the story through the motel maids. I love the description of the room as they flung the door open. Stale champagne and feathers. Even though Jane Babies is mentioned in passing the reader has her visualized and it's a nice surprise when she reappears at the end of the piece. After reading about the FanStory convention it sounds like a wild and crazy event. I'm sure Grace and Maddy will be invited next year. gayla
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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So clever to tell the story through the motel maids. I love the description of the room as they flung the door open. Stale champagne and feathers. Even though Jane Babies is mentioned in passing the reader has her visualized and it's a nice surprise when she reappears at the end of the piece. After reading about the FanStory convention it sounds like a wild and crazy event. I'm sure Grace and Maddy will be invited next year. gayla
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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The hotel maids will have lots to talk about and maybe write about, too. I am thrilled that you enjoyed this bit of fun...I wasn't quite ready to let go of the excitement, So I wrote a twofer. Thanks!
Smiles, Carol