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Two very real women in not so real situation.

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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Jacob, that was excellent! I'm sorry I can't award it with a well deserved six, but it truly deserves one. I bet you can sing well, too. I didn't get a chance to read any of their story, not being around as much as I would have liked. But I loved how you turned this into such a good story. Well done! :)) Sandra xx

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 Comment Written 29-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Sandra, it was really fun writing it and imagining what a Fanstory convention would be like. I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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We all know who you are and love your writing. Thank you for sharing this with us. I had fun reading.

Debbie smiles 'I wouldn't want to ruin the surprise now, would I? In any case, it's only rumour I've heard, there might not be anything in it.' (smiles.)

. If I'd known I'd be doing karaoke I would've mentally prepared myself. (karaoke,)

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 Comment Written 29-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Barbara, I had fun writing this one. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.