Hunted!
A FLASH - of what's to be18 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
There is a whole lot of story in these few short words. I guess flash is more of a structure, grid, or outline, hitting the high spots, or the low spots if you're driving a drunken car in the fog. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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There is a whole lot of story in these few short words. I guess flash is more of a structure, grid, or outline, hitting the high spots, or the low spots if you're driving a drunken car in the fog. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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It's a "tease" for my next novel. Hope it spikes your interest.... Thanks for stopping by and saying hello. Take care.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
I love how you manage to get a twist right at the end of these short pieces, Carol. You are an excellent flash fiction writer and I love how much you manage to pack into a few short lines. Another excellent, well written piece. I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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I love how you manage to get a twist right at the end of these short pieces, Carol. You are an excellent flash fiction writer and I love how much you manage to pack into a few short lines. Another excellent, well written piece. I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thanks, Jacob! It's a "tease" for my next novel. Hope it spikes your interest. Now, if I can just find time to write it. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You told an entire story and used only a few words. I'm impressed. As you know I need a lot of words to tell a story. LOL I had fun reading. Thank you for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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You told an entire story and used only a few words. I'm impressed. As you know I need a lot of words to tell a story. LOL I had fun reading. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Me too! But the flashes have been fun to write. this one is a "tease" for the next book I hope to find time to write. Thanks so much, Barbara.
miles, Carol
Comment from samandlancelot
Hi Begin Again,
It's like a world where they know things we usually don't know. Except, my sister-in-law had a vision of her son crashing his yellow Corvette at the same moment he crashed it. She frantically tried to locate him. He was alright, but it shows there is more to understanding how things work in this world than what science has been able to discover.
Revenge! Why did the prisoner want revenge? What gift did he have to know the exact moment when revenge was satisfied.
I like how you leave the reader to figure out motives and capabilities of all those involved.
Patricia
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Hi Begin Again,
It's like a world where they know things we usually don't know. Except, my sister-in-law had a vision of her son crashing his yellow Corvette at the same moment he crashed it. She frantically tried to locate him. He was alright, but it shows there is more to understanding how things work in this world than what science has been able to discover.
Revenge! Why did the prisoner want revenge? What gift did he have to know the exact moment when revenge was satisfied.
I like how you leave the reader to figure out motives and capabilities of all those involved.
Patricia
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much and I am thrilled that you enjoyed it. It's a "tease" for my next novel. Hope it spikes your interest. Now I just have to find time to write it. LOl
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
How to capture a moment in just fifty words. Effortlessly and elegantly done. The emotion is vivid and the whole piece leaves me with so many unanswered questions
Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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How to capture a moment in just fifty words. Effortlessly and elegantly done. The emotion is vivid and the whole piece leaves me with so many unanswered questions
Well done.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Hello, Tim! Thanks for stopping by to read the flash. It's a "tease" for my next novel. Hope it spikes your interest. Now i have to find time to write it. LOL
Smiles, Carol
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As one who appreciates the joy and time needed to write a book, I hop you find both and look forward to reading it.
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Thanks so much, Tim!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
I loved this. You say so much in just a few words. You really are very talented and nail everything you post. I aspire to be as good as you one day.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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I loved this. You say so much in just a few words. You really are very talented and nail everything you post. I aspire to be as good as you one day.
Cecilia
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thanks for all the compliments, Cecelia. I'm glad you liked this one. It's a "tease" for my next novel. Hope it spikes your interest.
Smiles, Carol
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It is a tease and I can't wait until the rest of the novel drops.
Cecilia
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Soon!
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Thank you. I have a long way to go. I must say I have picked up some useful information from talented artist, such as yourself.
Cecilia
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I'll be glad to help in anyway I can, but I assure you I am not an expert. Smiles!
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You may not be an expert, but I can learn a lot form you.
Cecilia
Comment from papa55mike
There always seems to be a way to get revenge on someone when they least expect it. What a wonderfully written story. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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There always seems to be a way to get revenge on someone when they least expect it. What a wonderfully written story. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much, Mike. I always appreciate your thoughts. It's a "tease" for my next novel. Hope it spikes your interest. Now, I have to find time to write it. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow, what a gripping opening! Your ability to create tension right from the start is fantastic. I felt the woman's fear as she navigated the fog. The headlights in the mirror really added to the suspense. The ending was great. Keep up the amazing work!
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Wow, what a gripping opening! Your ability to create tension right from the start is fantastic. I felt the woman's fear as she navigated the fog. The headlights in the mirror really added to the suspense. The ending was great. Keep up the amazing work!
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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I hope it grabbed you and left you wanting more, because I think it will be the start of my next book. Does it interest you? I hope so.
Smiles, Carol