God's Children
A poem30 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, we may not need a talent to be great or special in the eye of God, but there is a talent (in your thought and words) that brings hope and joy to those who read it, so very well written with a wonderful message****kahpot
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Excellent, we may not need a talent to be great or special in the eye of God, but there is a talent (in your thought and words) that brings hope and joy to those who read it, so very well written with a wonderful message****kahpot
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
Comment from LateBloomer
Roy, your poem is beautifully penned--sincere and soulful. Of note:
My Saviour and my hero
my brother, Lord and friend,.
Always walking by my side
His friendship cannot end.
(The above lines brought a tear to my eye. Good sensory appeal.)
Silky rhyming. Well done. Exceptional writing. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
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Roy, your poem is beautifully penned--sincere and soulful. Of note:
My Saviour and my hero
my brother, Lord and friend,.
Always walking by my side
His friendship cannot end.
(The above lines brought a tear to my eye. Good sensory appeal.)
Silky rhyming. Well done. Exceptional writing. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
Good poem of God's presence in your life, Roy. Yes, Jesus is a brother who stays with us always, no matter the circumstances, and He loves us. Good reminder that we are His heirs. Blessings. Carol
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Good poem of God's presence in your life, Roy. Yes, Jesus is a brother who stays with us always, no matter the circumstances, and He loves us. Good reminder that we are His heirs. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
Comment from Samantha Wymer
We are all children of God just like your beautiful poem states. A good Sheppard that watches over his flock. You have a gift Roy that gods blessed you with. The way you right poems in a way we can understand. Never lose that. God bless you.
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We are all children of God just like your beautiful poem states. A good Sheppard that watches over his flock. You have a gift Roy that gods blessed you with. The way you right poems in a way we can understand. Never lose that. God bless you.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
Comment from GWHARGIS
I love that you claim Jesus as your brother. He is our friend and no better friend exists. This was a beautiful poem full of hope and faith. Beautifully written. Gretchen
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I love that you claim Jesus as your brother. He is our friend and no better friend exists. This was a beautiful poem full of hope and faith. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
Comment from nomi338
Just stop and think for a moment. All of the wisdom that has ever existed in written form has a basis in words that God and his son Jesus Christ either uttered or caused to be written by inspiration.
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Just stop and think for a moment. All of the wisdom that has ever existed in written form has a basis in words that God and his son Jesus Christ either uttered or caused to be written by inspiration.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
Comment from patcelaw
He is always there with us walking by our side, helping us through the difficulties in life. I enjoyed your poem very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Also, wish you a wonderful week.
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He is always there with us walking by our side, helping us through the difficulties in life. I enjoyed your poem very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Also, wish you a wonderful week.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Yes, we are all God's children.
No fame or special talent (You do have special talent given to you by God. You are an excellent poet and use that talent to share God's message.)
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Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Yes, we are all God's children.
No fame or special talent (You do have special talent given to you by God. You are an excellent poet and use that talent to share God's message.)
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
Comment from godlucifer
the sight of god. the sight of the lord. to walk upon is to walk upon one's beliefs. children of god,children of beliefs. your poem was true to its heart. thanks for the read.
yours truly
godlucifer
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the sight of god. the sight of the lord. to walk upon is to walk upon one's beliefs. children of god,children of beliefs. your poem was true to its heart. thanks for the read.
yours truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
Comment from DonandVicki
As I get older, I have come to realize just how insignificant that I am. In my youth, my ego made me feel like the center of the universe. Your poem has great spiritual truth.
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As I get older, I have come to realize just how insignificant that I am. In my youth, my ego made me feel like the center of the universe. Your poem has great spiritual truth.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024