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Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Powder Keg"Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Fun stuff! Sorry I couldn't make it to the party, but I'm betting y'all had some fun with some of those outfits!! ;) Thanx for sharing the smiles and have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Fun stuff! Sorry I couldn't make it to the party, but I'm betting y'all had some fun with some of those outfits!! ;) Thanx for sharing the smiles and have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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We needed the presence of an irrepressible blonde Southern charmer there on hand with us!! I hope you're going to take us up on the write-your-own-chapter offer. I'd LOVE to have you there, reporting from the front lines, assessing, cracking jokes.
Thanks for the lovely review. xoxox
Comment from jmdg1954
The only thing missing would've been Mike Tyson and his tiger from the movie,"The Hangover".
This was outrageously hilarious. Your introduction of each writer was spectacular and those that have a picture of themselves in their portfolio made my vision of the introduction that much more special.
As much as I'd like to prepare a chapter, what I would write in no way would come close to yours and Gretchen's. Each post was so different and both equally enjoyable.
Great writing...
John
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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The only thing missing would've been Mike Tyson and his tiger from the movie,"The Hangover".
This was outrageously hilarious. Your introduction of each writer was spectacular and those that have a picture of themselves in their portfolio made my vision of the introduction that much more special.
As much as I'd like to prepare a chapter, what I would write in no way would come close to yours and Gretchen's. Each post was so different and both equally enjoyable.
Great writing...
John
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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That's exactly what we've loved about this project. We were just talking about it the other day and agreed that although we couldn't be more different on the outside, inside, we're twins. Our humor matches, our sense of the absurd is the same, and we have no compunction about calling out situations as we see them. But that's US. Parties are good because they're filled with all KINDS of different personalities, and adding yours to the fray could only make it more delightful.
Thanks for this really wonderful review.
xoxoxo
Comment from Liz O'Neill
She'd been pacing for hours, unable to shake the nagging feeling that something was wrong. Good weaving of juxtapositions. This sorts out the elevator confusion.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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She'd been pacing for hours, unable to shake the nagging feeling that something was wrong. Good weaving of juxtapositions. This sorts out the elevator confusion.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Hmmm. Liz, I don't know what this means.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This chapter is FANTASTIC. You humorously put me in the room where I could easily visualize all the participants. This chapter left me feeling excited, like I were actually. When I finished reading, I had a feel-good smile on my face. You have put a lot of thought and work into this project, and I'm sure all your readers enjoyed it as much as I have.
Oh NO! Jane Babies.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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This chapter is FANTASTIC. You humorously put me in the room where I could easily visualize all the participants. This chapter left me feeling excited, like I were actually. When I finished reading, I had a feel-good smile on my face. You have put a lot of thought and work into this project, and I'm sure all your readers enjoyed it as much as I have.
Oh NO! Jane Babies.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Ohhhh, yes! Like a bad penny, the woman just will NOT go away!!
Thanks for such an encouraging and enthusiastic review. I loved it. Have you read Gretchen's? The ante just keeps getting upped!! xoxo
Comment from judiverse
The long-anticipated FS convention is finally taking place. What luxurious surroundings. I like the idea of the fore-party and the description of the arrival of all the guests. Isn't it the truth--some of the men dressed as they jolly well pleased and others wore tuxedoes. Loved the images of Roy and Robert as they had to have assistance getting up. Dolly was just as I imagined her--very elegant. Lea Tonin must be absolutely gorgeous. This is so descriptive, I really felt like I was there. Loved the chapter ending with Jane making her entrance (after having to take the servants elevator) in a gown identical to Rachelle's. (I am sure you wore yours much better.) A total delight. judi
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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The long-anticipated FS convention is finally taking place. What luxurious surroundings. I like the idea of the fore-party and the description of the arrival of all the guests. Isn't it the truth--some of the men dressed as they jolly well pleased and others wore tuxedoes. Loved the images of Roy and Robert as they had to have assistance getting up. Dolly was just as I imagined her--very elegant. Lea Tonin must be absolutely gorgeous. This is so descriptive, I really felt like I was there. Loved the chapter ending with Jane making her entrance (after having to take the servants elevator) in a gown identical to Rachelle's. (I am sure you wore yours much better.) A total delight. judi
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you!! I liked your part, goring Barbara as she bent to take a bow.
Be sure to check out Gretchen's chapter. She raised the ante of outrageousness even further!! xoxox
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You're welcome. I really enjoyed this, as I knew I would. What a gathering of characters. I will explain my reasons for goring Barbara in the butt when I write my chapter, and I certainly will be writing one. You made everything really come to life with all the details. judi
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Oh, YAAAY!! I will love that!! oxox
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
I absolutely love this. Your portrayal of everyone is perfect- I could just see it! I especially loved Mrs KT's entrance- "with her beautiful, deep-dimple smile on display." You guys have created something truly wonderful here. Ok, off to read Gretchen's!!
Xoxoxo
Jess
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I absolutely love this. Your portrayal of everyone is perfect- I could just see it! I especially loved Mrs KT's entrance- "with her beautiful, deep-dimple smile on display." You guys have created something truly wonderful here. Ok, off to read Gretchen's!!
Xoxoxo
Jess
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thanks, Jess; you know I love it whenever you review. xoxox
Comment from BethShelby
This was an excellent chapter for this adventure, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I always look forward to more so now I 'm over to see what Gretchen has to say about the party in the penthouse.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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This was an excellent chapter for this adventure, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I always look forward to more so now I 'm over to see what Gretchen has to say about the party in the penthouse.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you! Glad you've enjoyed it! xoxox
Comment from BethShelby
This was an excellent chapter for this adventure, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I always look forward to more so now I 'm over to see what Gretchen has to say about the party in the penthouse.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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This was an excellent chapter for this adventure, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I always look forward to more so now I 'm over to see what Gretchen has to say about the party in the penthouse.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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This double-posted, Beth.
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Sorry about that. I only post it once but sometimes my computer feels it needs to be posted more than once.
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No problem.
No problem.
(I bet you liked what I did there, didn't you, Beth...)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is wonderful. I couldn't help but to laugh out loud. You and Gretchen are doing a wonderful job writing this. I don't think I've enjoyed anything as much. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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This is wonderful. I couldn't help but to laugh out loud. You and Gretchen are doing a wonderful job writing this. I don't think I've enjoyed anything as much. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you! I appreciate this so much!
But, did you like your cameo appearance??!! xoxoxox
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Certainly did. I will try to write something, but right now, I haven't come up with any ideas. I promise to work on it.
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You've got lots of time. I know for a fact you will create something perfect. xoxox
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Only until Thursday, right?
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Correct. Thursday at midnight.
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I have been thinking about it. So far, I've got myself in the elevator thinking about all the people I'll see and nothing more. LOL
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You're creative; there's not a doubt in my mind but that you'll come up with something terrific!!
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We'll see, but nothing really right now.
Comment from humpwhistle
You two are nutty as a squirrel's pantry. You got my cowpoke look down, but you missed my hat and the panache with which I pulled the whole thing off. Moreover, 'I want snacks?' Those are the words you put into the mouth of the undisputed King of Dialogue? Sheesh! Next time I insist on writing my own lines.
Rachelle, Gretchen, I love this bit of silly fantasy--and any time to wish to stage such a party, count me (and my hat) in.
As for your 'Write a Chapter' challenge, I'll try to oblige, but I haven't kept up with the story, and yet know if I can fit the template you've created. I do love the style with which you both write.
Since I left FS, I've channelled most of my creativity back into music. I realized I can't entertain two mistresses, so I've let my writing slide. But, I just checked my guitar into rehab--cracked bridge, loose neck, and the like. I won't get it back for three or four weeks. Good luthiers cannot be rushed. I'm Jonesing. But if I buy a second guitar, I know I'll spend money I don't have. We guitarists tend to do that. We're like kids in a candy store--I can't visit a guitar store and leave emptyhanded. Ain't possible. So, maybe I can distract myself with your challenge.
By the way, if you still have the suite, how 'bout putting me up for a few nights? I promise, no hank-panky.
Piece,
Lee
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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You two are nutty as a squirrel's pantry. You got my cowpoke look down, but you missed my hat and the panache with which I pulled the whole thing off. Moreover, 'I want snacks?' Those are the words you put into the mouth of the undisputed King of Dialogue? Sheesh! Next time I insist on writing my own lines.
Rachelle, Gretchen, I love this bit of silly fantasy--and any time to wish to stage such a party, count me (and my hat) in.
As for your 'Write a Chapter' challenge, I'll try to oblige, but I haven't kept up with the story, and yet know if I can fit the template you've created. I do love the style with which you both write.
Since I left FS, I've channelled most of my creativity back into music. I realized I can't entertain two mistresses, so I've let my writing slide. But, I just checked my guitar into rehab--cracked bridge, loose neck, and the like. I won't get it back for three or four weeks. Good luthiers cannot be rushed. I'm Jonesing. But if I buy a second guitar, I know I'll spend money I don't have. We guitarists tend to do that. We're like kids in a candy store--I can't visit a guitar store and leave emptyhanded. Ain't possible. So, maybe I can distract myself with your challenge.
By the way, if you still have the suite, how 'bout putting me up for a few nights? I promise, no hank-panky.
Piece,
Lee
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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What? No hanky-panky? Then whyever in the world would we agree to put you up? Your charming reparte? To steal your hat? Honestly, Del, you're as in need of repair as your guitar!!
Thank you for the fun review and the extra sparklers.
xoxoxo
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Since when does 'no hanky-panky' mean no hanky-panky? Are you new, or what? I'll take all the hanky I can panky. This is fun, Shelly, but 'I want snacks?' You don't think I'd be ready with a better line than that?
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"Forsooth and alas!" said Humpwhistle. "Might I partake of some sumptuous liquids and fibrous sustenance?"
PLMK if I should substitute the original dialogue with this...
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Smarty pants!