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The Empty Chair

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The mysterious disappearance of a childhood friend

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Fiona killed herself and killed Peyton. I'd already known she'd killed Peyton. It seems all for nothing, because Sharice had a different boyfriend. I'm wondering if Peyton had somebody else too. Fiona had some issues, that's for sure. Thank you for sharing this with us.

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 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
    She was a psycho and believed in her head that they were meant to be together. One more chapter to tie up the ends. Thanks so much for reading this weird one.
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Wow, I saw it coming, and then I didn't. And then I did. But not really, I didn't. Now, I'm sitting here wondering what I've truly realized for sure.
Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
    There's one more chapter I think in order to tie up the loose ends. She definitely was a psycho. thanks for reading this weirdo.
    smiles and hugs, Carol