Shedding the Old Coat
My Journey of being Surprised by Joy16 total reviews
Comment from DonandVicki
"My faith used to hang like an old coat." I like the way you started your poem. It struck home to me because that is how my faith hung on my shoulders. We need that new coat. Well written.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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"My faith used to hang like an old coat." I like the way you started your poem. It struck home to me because that is how my faith hung on my shoulders. We need that new coat. Well written.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Hi DonandVicki,
Thanks for an inspiring review. Truly appreciate your thoughts about faith and that my work touched you.
Stay well,
Senyai
Comment from Brandy N. Morrison
I love this! This poem resonates with me on such a deep level because, as a Christian, my faith is everything. I can relate to the feeling of sometimes letting faith sit on the sidelines, like that old coat gathering dust. It's so easy to let life get in the way, to think we've got it all handled, and before we know it, our faith becomes more of a fallback than something we live out daily.
What I love about this poem is how it captures the transformation from treating faith as a mere security blanket to realizing it's so much more than that. Faith isn't just something we turn to in times of regret or loneliness. It's a promise of restoration and healing for our brokenness. The way the poem speaks about faith being part of us--woven into our very being, supporting us like wings as we search for our true home--is such a beautiful reminder of how faith should guide us every step of the way.
The imagery of seeking the lighthouse in the night, being led to a place of rest in God's presence, is incredibly moving. I often feel like I'm searching for that light, needing to hear those living words that breathe life into my soul. This poem captures that longing perfectly, and it reminds me that faith isn't just something we hold on to--it's something that carries us, sustains us, and nourishes us when we need it most. Fantastic job! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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I love this! This poem resonates with me on such a deep level because, as a Christian, my faith is everything. I can relate to the feeling of sometimes letting faith sit on the sidelines, like that old coat gathering dust. It's so easy to let life get in the way, to think we've got it all handled, and before we know it, our faith becomes more of a fallback than something we live out daily.
What I love about this poem is how it captures the transformation from treating faith as a mere security blanket to realizing it's so much more than that. Faith isn't just something we turn to in times of regret or loneliness. It's a promise of restoration and healing for our brokenness. The way the poem speaks about faith being part of us--woven into our very being, supporting us like wings as we search for our true home--is such a beautiful reminder of how faith should guide us every step of the way.
The imagery of seeking the lighthouse in the night, being led to a place of rest in God's presence, is incredibly moving. I often feel like I'm searching for that light, needing to hear those living words that breathe life into my soul. This poem captures that longing perfectly, and it reminds me that faith isn't just something we hold on to--it's something that carries us, sustains us, and nourishes us when we need it most. Fantastic job! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Brandy, I thought I sent you a long thank you for your thorough and expertly written review for my poem. But FanStop says I did not...I do apologize...your kind words touched me that it spoke to you! You are good to take the time to write in such helpful detail how you felt on key aspects of my faith poem. Thank you thank you as your words made my day.... and the exceptional rating did too.
Stay well,
Senyai
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Your welcome, hun! I look forward to reading more of your work!
Comment from royowen
I believe that CS Lewis, although I think he was a traditional believer, he lost faith, until he realised that only fools choose to not believe, but then he came to faith's experience of rebirth, which probably comes from being 'all in' but God is wise, He responds to those who are willing to embrace Him wholeheartedly, and God knows our heart, which is what happened to you, bless you, great write, thanks for sharing, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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I believe that CS Lewis, although I think he was a traditional believer, he lost faith, until he realised that only fools choose to not believe, but then he came to faith's experience of rebirth, which probably comes from being 'all in' but God is wise, He responds to those who are willing to embrace Him wholeheartedly, and God knows our heart, which is what happened to you, bless you, great write, thanks for sharing, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Thanks, Roy... your kind words are always welcome :-)
All the best,
Senyai
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A pleasure
Comment from Nicki.B
This is such a beautiful poem of faith, I really love how you captured faith in connection with different elements or situations in life, how it guides you through and picks you up when even in the darkest times.
Well done and good luck with the contest
Best Wishes
Nicki
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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This is such a beautiful poem of faith, I really love how you captured faith in connection with different elements or situations in life, how it guides you through and picks you up when even in the darkest times.
Well done and good luck with the contest
Best Wishes
Nicki
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Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Hi Nicki,
Your words touched me. Truly appreciate your thoughts on my poem. Means so much and I thank you.
Stay well,
Senyai
Comment from papa55mike
I love the imagery in the first stanza. Faith is something we need to wear constantly. Our belief in God is what wins the battles. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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I love the imagery in the first stanza. Faith is something we need to wear constantly. Our belief in God is what wins the battles. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Mike. I am truly honored by your wonderful review. Thank you also for the extra stars, I am grateful for your reception to my poem!
Have a wonderful day,
Senyai
Comment from gansach
This is a wonderful description of your faith and its meaning and a great entry for the My Faith Poetry competition. The free verse is easy~flowing and it has a nice presentation. I enjoyed reading it. I especially enjoyed the last stanza, great imagery.
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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This is a wonderful description of your faith and its meaning and a great entry for the My Faith Poetry competition. The free verse is easy~flowing and it has a nice presentation. I enjoyed reading it. I especially enjoyed the last stanza, great imagery.
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Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Hi Gansach,
I am late in replying, but truly feel blessed by your kind review on my poem of faith. Your thoughts are taken to heart.
Senyai