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The Last Conversation

A free verse poem

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This free verse, The Last Conversation, begins benignly but quickly becomes a discovered suicide (I suspect) as both souls contemplate the scene of death and reflection.

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 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024

Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Videl
This is a vivid conversation between a couple at the time of death. It could be a suicide. It seems they both are sorry for what has gone before this situation.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan

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 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024