Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "News Lady"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from BethShelby
Well at least it doesn't look as if his dad is taking him away right away. Dougie is pretty cocky and he quicky realized he wasn't about to get a hug. I'm sure Miranda might be more to deal with than she was before.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Well at least it doesn't look as if his dad is taking him away right away. Dougie is pretty cocky and he quicky realized he wasn't about to get a hug. I'm sure Miranda might be more to deal with than she was before.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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She is that. Thank you so much for this. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Okay, I have numerous questions about what is going to happen next and how is Miranda's life going to change. I can't wait to find out. I really like this story.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Okay, I have numerous questions about what is going to happen next and how is Miranda's life going to change. I can't wait to find out. I really like this story.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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I have numerous questions as well, but I'm pretty sure the life changing will be good. thank you so much for this. Gretchen
Comment from Sanku
So he is teaching his son to drive a truck?Is it allowed without a permit?
What a backbone less man to come back pretending all are okay ! There is tension now in the atmosphere...
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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So he is teaching his son to drive a truck?Is it allowed without a permit?
What a backbone less man to come back pretending all are okay ! There is tension now in the atmosphere...
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Around here, the rules are bent and ignored all the time. Kids as young as ten learn how to drive farm trucks and tractors. As long as you don't get caught... Thank you so my for this. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
That reporter is up to no good. Miranda is right to not trust her.
Good for Miranda, raising her knee to Dougie. Dougie has no idea at all. And yes, he'll find out how much she has changed.
Is it legal for W to drive a truck without a learner's permit? Here, it's very strict. An exam on road and traffic rules before one can even get L plates. No one aged sixteen can have lessons in a truck, and even on a car there always must be an L plate displayed. Or is it a ute? Like a pick-up truck? Engrosssing chapter.
Wendy
Edit: "You're life is going to change, Miranda. Just know that." (Your life ...)
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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That reporter is up to no good. Miranda is right to not trust her.
Good for Miranda, raising her knee to Dougie. Dougie has no idea at all. And yes, he'll find out how much she has changed.
Is it legal for W to drive a truck without a learner's permit? Here, it's very strict. An exam on road and traffic rules before one can even get L plates. No one aged sixteen can have lessons in a truck, and even on a car there always must be an L plate displayed. Or is it a ute? Like a pick-up truck? Engrosssing chapter.
Wendy
Edit: "You're life is going to change, Miranda. Just know that." (Your life ...)
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Here where I live, people take their kids out to learn to drive all the time. I've watched ten year old kids drive their parents trucks in our neighborhood. lol. thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a tenuous situation for Miranda who cares so much for Waylon and wants the best for him, and now is Father has made an appearance, there is a worry that he will take off with him and ruin his life. I am curious about the reporter saying Miranda's life is going to change very soon, you dropped that little line in to tease us Gretchen. Another great chapter in this story, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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This is a tenuous situation for Miranda who cares so much for Waylon and wants the best for him, and now is Father has made an appearance, there is a worry that he will take off with him and ruin his life. I am curious about the reporter saying Miranda's life is going to change very soon, you dropped that little line in to tease us Gretchen. Another great chapter in this story, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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I did do that to tease you. Lol. Hopefully, it will be a good change. Thank you so much for this wonderful review. Gretchen
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I can't wait to find out more!
Comment from phoegon
You have established great tension between the characters here. I love the small details like flicking things off the counter and more that you have that all builds your characters even more.
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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You have established great tension between the characters here. I love the small details like flicking things off the counter and more that you have that all builds your characters even more.
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for this. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
So pleased we are finally meeting Dougie. This was a great chapter and I am looking forward to more in the same vein. Funny how the reporter came just before Dougie arrived.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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So pleased we are finally meeting Dougie. This was a great chapter and I am looking forward to more in the same vein. Funny how the reporter came just before Dougie arrived.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Not sure why the reporter is starting to come around again. It might have something to do with Dougie but who knows. Gretchen