Knowing truth and trust.
A poem.12 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
Roy,
This is an excellent well crafted poem that speaks directly to the human condition. Free will allows to make choices but also to realize our mistakes and change a new path to follow. Faith is the gift that enables us to see ourselves within allowing us to choose enter the narrow gate after we've entered the wide gate and follow the words of Matthew 11:28-30. You've captured the story of the prodigal son in this spiritual write.
All the best,
Eugene
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Roy,
This is an excellent well crafted poem that speaks directly to the human condition. Free will allows to make choices but also to realize our mistakes and change a new path to follow. Faith is the gift that enables us to see ourselves within allowing us to choose enter the narrow gate after we've entered the wide gate and follow the words of Matthew 11:28-30. You've captured the story of the prodigal son in this spiritual write.
All the best,
Eugene
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
Comment from Esther Brown
Yes. Roy, that picture reminds me of Pilgrim's Progress. Many of us struggle with leaving our burdens on the alter with sticky fingers. Think we can carry ours as well as other people burdens all by ourselves. Praise God we don't have to. Esther
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
Yes. Roy, that picture reminds me of Pilgrim's Progress. Many of us struggle with leaving our burdens on the alter with sticky fingers. Think we can carry ours as well as other people burdens all by ourselves. Praise God we don't have to. Esther
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Thanks for is wonderful review Esther, blessings Roy