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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I started to read this yesterday, but was tired and wasn't getting anything from it, so decided to wait for today and read with fresh eyes. I'm glad I did. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us. Patricia is on my heart, and I will continue to pray for her.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
    Thank you for praying and even returning to read this a second time. Hope you are getting enough sleep! Hugs!
Comment from Ric Myworld
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I don't know if two surgeries is better than one, but if just maybe it gets twice as much done, it will be worth the added . . . well, I can't say fun, but if it works, you've won. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
    Thank you for reviewing, Ric! I think they are being extra cautious. Hugs!
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
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This was lovely and I read it last night but was too tired to review. So I left it for this morning. This is such a lovely story. Is this an actual picture shared from the hospital room? Either way she was an inspiration as she compassionately gives of herself to others, even as she is down. She reminds me of someone else I know...
Hmmm, I wonder who that could be?? LOL

So thank you for doing this. I wish I could put my poem in the book too to show Patricia's and let her know how happy I am she had the surgeries and she is doing so well. Thanks again for this beautiful piece. Love, Debi

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much, Debi! Hmmm. She sounds like you! Appreciate all you do when you're battling health issues all the time. Hugs and prayers 💓💞🙏
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Comment from Sanku
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As your heart heals and prayers prevail
Your boat though minor storms would sail
love surrounds you day and night
surgeons hands guided by His light

with extra vigour your heart will beat
you'll soon be back in your Muse's retreat..

I managed these rhymes lines for Patricia, Helen!My prayers are with her!







 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
    Thank you for your poem review, Santha! I hope Patricia saw it!
    Hugs!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a wonderful rhyming tribute to Patricia who is undergoing surgery just now and I enjoyed your fine words. I am glad she is getting some medical help over there as your care system seems so much better than ours. I enjoyed your lovely, kind and endearing words Helen, and I hope Patricia recovers soon, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much, Dolly! I first met Patricia in 2016 when I started here.
    Hugs!
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Helen, thank you for sharing this and keeping us updated on Patricia's progress. She has had her share of trials and tribulations. I'll will be praying for a speedy recover and that the doctors keep infection
at bay. Well chosen photo. Well done. A poem of love. Xo. M

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much for the review, Margaret!
    Hugs and blessings!
Comment from gansach
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Patricia is a dear woman with a beautiful spirit. I always enjoy reading her work and her encouraging and kind reviews. Your poem does a lovely job of describing her sweet and caring nature. She is in my prayers. Well done!

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much for your prayers and reviewing!
    Blessings!
Comment from Teri7
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God has a way of putting us in places where we can give Him glory and testify. I will be praying for her and her to heal quickly without any infection or backset. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Yes, you know it well, Teri! Thanks so much for praying! Hugs!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Helen,
Your poem is so beautifully written and about such a precious lady. I would say I can't believe that in her own pain and suffering, she reached out to touch another in need, but in her case, I do believe it.

Thank you for sharing this jewel, the poem and the person,
Hugs,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Yes, Patricia is amazing! Thank you for the super review and rating, Rhonda! Hugs and blessings!
Comment from Wendy G
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A lovely poem for Patricia. She is very willing to offer her testimony to God's grace and goodness, so she will be a blessing wherever she is. I prayed, as did others, for wisdom for the surgeons, so this second stage is an answer to that, and it is for the best. Ongoing prayers for her.
Wendy

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Wendy! I'm sure it will go fine. They have come a long way in heart surgeries these days.
    Hugs!