Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

June,
This is an excellent poem. I've seen scenes like this one. I lived in a rural town with a few creeks and springs that stood still by winter's freeze.A nice photo complementing your words.
Excellent club entry,
Best wishes,
Cindy

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is beautifully written for the cadence club and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It flows very well when it is red and loud and your presentation is lovely. May you have a good day and God bless. Patricia.

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 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Your words read like a waterfall stopped in time. "Winter's kiss captivates Autumn" is a perfect line that creates feelings and emotions. The impact of the change of seasons is also seen in your words.

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 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024