Rage
A cadae poem24 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Anger is a difficult emotion to control and once out of the box is often neither pretty or productive. Your verse, in few words, manages to capture the force of this escalating emotion and the damage it causes to the bearer. Your imagery of an erupting volcano is very apt, especially when the rage subsides and the reverberations are left for all to see. Well done, Sanku. Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Anger is a difficult emotion to control and once out of the box is often neither pretty or productive. Your verse, in few words, manages to capture the force of this escalating emotion and the damage it causes to the bearer. Your imagery of an erupting volcano is very apt, especially when the rage subsides and the reverberations are left for all to see. Well done, Sanku. Debbie
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much .I have often witnessed this spurts of anger. LATER REGRETS . THANKS FORBSTOPPING BY
Comment from Nicki.B
I totally agree, anger is such a waste of energy and one put as much strength into another emotion that was worth while what difference would it make! Great poem, I enjoyed the style and flow, I've never seen that style a cadae!
Well done!
Well done
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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I totally agree, anger is such a waste of energy and one put as much strength into another emotion that was worth while what difference would it make! Great poem, I enjoyed the style and flow, I've never seen that style a cadae!
Well done!
Well done
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much IT should have appeared under club event .so many didn't know what a cadae is .
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I agree with you, anger is a destructive emotion that can end meaningful relationships. I've been on both sides but I'm quick to admit my error. Love is the answer and also letting go.
Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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I agree with you, anger is a destructive emotion that can end meaningful relationships. I've been on both sides but I'm quick to admit my error. Love is the answer and also letting go.
Well done!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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So true thd sad part is that once started they can't control. they go on till they are exhausted. LATER comes regret.
Thank yoj for stopping by
Comment from gansach
This is another new form of poetry for me. I had to look it up so I knew what I was looking for. It's quite interesting and you have done a wonderful job of writing it. A very apt description of violent anger uncontrolled and the damage it can cause. Great artwork to complement it. (One note: I think it should be blazing eyes spume instead of spumes since eyes is plural). Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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This is another new form of poetry for me. I had to look it up so I knew what I was looking for. It's quite interesting and you have done a wonderful job of writing it. A very apt description of violent anger uncontrolled and the damage it can cause. Great artwork to complement it. (One note: I think it should be blazing eyes spume instead of spumes since eyes is plural). Well done!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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It should have come under Club events then the details would have been there.Thank you for taking the trouble and reading and reviewingI
Comment from royowen
Human conflict is a destructive and a terrible thing, it inevitably, depending on its view, is always wrong, if it depends on violence as a solution, the expression "let sleeping dogs lie" is a good philosophy to follow, nothing is more important than living peaceably with one's neighbour, well done Santha, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Human conflict is a destructive and a terrible thing, it inevitably, depending on its view, is always wrong, if it depends on violence as a solution, the expression "let sleeping dogs lie" is a good philosophy to follow, nothing is more important than living peaceably with one's neighbour, well done Santha, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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I know SEE the total INSANITY that is happening in middle east where will it all end? Thanks for stopping by
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Well done
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I would not like to be in the path of an erupting volcano and I enjoyed your philosophy here, a fiery post full of the power of our own determination, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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I would not like to be in the path of an erupting volcano and I enjoyed your philosophy here, a fiery post full of the power of our own determination, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank yoj very much Dolly
Comment from estory
I thought the rhythm of the language here captured those bursts of emotion in moments like these. The dark, sharp imagery put us in the middle of the tempest, as it were. And then in the aftermath we have the gloom of the regret, the pain of the separation, the loneliness. estory
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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I thought the rhythm of the language here captured those bursts of emotion in moments like these. The dark, sharp imagery put us in the middle of the tempest, as it were. And then in the aftermath we have the gloom of the regret, the pain of the separation, the loneliness. estory
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from jaded831
Words spoken in anger can't be taken back and resentment grows and grows. Your poem captures the emotions felt during angry moments and the pain experienced at such moments, and its lingering pain.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Words spoken in anger can't be taken back and resentment grows and grows. Your poem captures the emotions felt during angry moments and the pain experienced at such moments, and its lingering pain.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Another gem penned by you
Makes clear that fear = pain whether self-inflicted or in retribution
Too many folk misinterpret the intent of a message or action and then war breaks out
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Another gem penned by you
Makes clear that fear = pain whether self-inflicted or in retribution
Too many folk misinterpret the intent of a message or action and then war breaks out
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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You are so right thank you very much
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Your so right, Sanku,
Anger is a wasted emotion and, in the end, no body wins. You aptly described the anger itself and then the aftermath in your poem. I could feel the anger, and also the call for change.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Your so right, Sanku,
Anger is a wasted emotion and, in the end, no body wins. You aptly described the anger itself and then the aftermath in your poem. I could feel the anger, and also the call for change.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much