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Comment from Heather Knight
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

You always find the most beautiful pictures to accompany your lovely words.
I also love the title, its musicality.
And I suspect you're a romantic like me.
Muchos besos.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Heather. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.

    Besitos y abrazos ❤️

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Begin Again
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Yesterday was my late husband's birthday and my thoughts were filled with memories and love...love that continues to this day. Your poem reminded me of how beautiful and lucky we were and I still am. Thank you for painting such a glorious picture.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Carol

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Gypsy, this deserves a six. I don't have one left but just know if I did, you would get it. Each phase of the day is beautifully described. As if, the scene was there because of the person she loves. Beautifully written. Gretchen

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Gretchen

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Marival.
This is a well done poem that tells the story of the beauty of nature and why we love it. It also is a metaphor for human love. We see the beauty in each other.
I like both illustrations. They follow the color scheme and are whimsical and beautiful.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan
PS By the way, I have just published a book called "The Interloper (and other stories in poetry and prose) by Joan Pechter. It is available on Amazon.com.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Joan. Congratulations on your new book. When I had more time, I published 2 books in Amazon. It was time consuming but fun. I wish you the best

    Gypsy 😊
reply by dragonpoet on 25-Sep-2024
    No problem, Marival. Thanks for the congrats.
    Joan
Comment from BethShelby
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You free verse poem is lovely. I like the sky described as a Honey morning sky. The poem has such positive tones. There is much love all around us, morning, noon and night. When love is in the air, all is right with our world.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Beth

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
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I like that a honey morning sky is fit for lovers and cloud gazers, and it surely is, it's been awhile since I was a lover as such, but I'm still a cloud gazer, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Roy

    Gypsy 😊
reply by royowen on 25-Sep-2024
    Most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
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This feels like a poem for that special couple who are still on their honeymoon decades later and still falling in love with each other all day long. Lovely poem. Best wishes in the contest!

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 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister.
    ❤️ you
reply by lyenochka on 25-Sep-2024
    💖💞🌺
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a beautiful romantic poem. I enjoyed listening to it very much. Your presentation is lovely. May you have a wonderful evening and a very terrific week. Patricia.

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 Comment Written 24-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
    thank you very much, Patricia

    gypsy 😊