Gently swaying reeds
Haiku30 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
I like the feeing your words convey
It is like the reeds are alive and swaying to music, the music of nature
Excellent haiku form that creates a feel for nature. Your words take the reader to another place.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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I like the feeing your words convey
It is like the reeds are alive and swaying to music, the music of nature
Excellent haiku form that creates a feel for nature. Your words take the reader to another place.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for such lovely comments
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Ohhhh ... I love this one. You have wonderful word imagery of the reeds. Beautiful presentation. You did so well with this week's event. Well done!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Ohhhh ... I love this one. You have wonderful word imagery of the reeds. Beautiful presentation. You did so well with this week's event. Well done!
Gypsy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you once again for these extra stat .
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh! I had forgotten this magic -- reeds truly DO make wonderful flutes.
Speaking of magic, your wee poem evokes the most marvelous imagery -- thank you for this reminder!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Oh! I had forgotten this magic -- reeds truly DO make wonderful flutes.
Speaking of magic, your wee poem evokes the most marvelous imagery -- thank you for this reminder!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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thank you very much for your encouraging comments
Comment from Begin Again
Isn't it grand that Nature has the ability to establish orchestras every where...music from the swaying reeds, birds chirping or crickets rubbing their legs together. I bet even the stars sing --something I recently wrote in one of my stories. We are blessed to live in a world joy if only we stop to listen.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Isn't it grand that Nature has the ability to establish orchestras every where...music from the swaying reeds, birds chirping or crickets rubbing their legs together. I bet even the stars sing --something I recently wrote in one of my stories. We are blessed to live in a world joy if only we stop to listen.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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true so true .Thank you very much for these lovely words
Comment from tempeste
Ciao !
I love watching wheat fields sway in the wind , they look like rippling waves , it's very soothing to see it and hear that shshshsh sound.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Ciao !
I love watching wheat fields sway in the wind , they look like rippling waves , it's very soothing to see it and hear that shshshsh sound.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you very muc.
Comment from godlucifer
i appreciate the melody of your talent. the way you describe the poem show the vision of your talent. your poem was truly structure and crafted. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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i appreciate the melody of your talent. the way you describe the poem show the vision of your talent. your poem was truly structure and crafted. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much..
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I can just imagine the fyfe-and-drum collaboration here as the swaying creates a sounds skin to the brush across the head of snare drum and the whistling created by the hollow stalks of the reeds! Wonderfully done!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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I can just imagine the fyfe-and-drum collaboration here as the swaying creates a sounds skin to the brush across the head of snare drum and the whistling created by the hollow stalks of the reeds! Wonderfully done!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for these encouraging words,Rachelle
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So totally my pleasure. xoxox
Comment from Ulla
Oh I liked this haiku for the club entry, sanku. It's just perfect. Yes, I can imagine that reeds are perfect for making flutes. The imagery is lovely. All the best, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Oh I liked this haiku for the club entry, sanku. It's just perfect. Yes, I can imagine that reeds are perfect for making flutes. The imagery is lovely. All the best, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nice haiku about reeds swaying in the wind making divine music like the image of the weeds bamboo forest swaying in the wind and swamp land all around
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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nice haiku about reeds swaying in the wind making divine music like the image of the weeds bamboo forest swaying in the wind and swamp land all around
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, I love this! I can just imagine seeing the reeds swaying and the "listening" to the "melodies of divine music". It made me think of the many sounds we don't hear like the stars and song of the whales - what a divine symphony must be going on all around us!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Oh, I love this! I can just imagine seeing the reeds swaying and the "listening" to the "melodies of divine music". It made me think of the many sounds we don't hear like the stars and song of the whales - what a divine symphony must be going on all around us!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much Helen and your gift .Flute was Lord krishna's instrument through which he used to lay divine music..