Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Robust Round Robin, has the proper formatting and admires the steadfast bird which keeps on calling a joyful tune even in the drizzling rain. Nice.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024

I'm happy you enjoyed this short poem on the robust little songstress. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated!

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I love the idea of the show going on no matter what. Your poem format works well here. I like how everything leads up to that final line. This is such a fun and enjoyable poem that celebrates my favorite bird!

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 Comment Written 19-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024

I'm happy you enjoyed this short poem on the robust little performer. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated!

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

And that's the truth, June!
Those little robins just never give up!
How I wish the robin pictured in your photograph lived in Michigan - he is an English robin = so much cuter than the American robin, but don't tell anyone I said that... :) :) :)

Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
fondly,
diane

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 Comment Written 19-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024

I'm happy you enjoyed this short poem on the robust little performer. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated!