A Perky Prospector
John & Shorty script #20, western humor16 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I have a serious aversion to Western-themed stories because of my husband's addiction to John Wayne movies and yet I enjoyed this fun, humorous read with those likable characters. Very good job.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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I have a serious aversion to Western-themed stories because of my husband's addiction to John Wayne movies and yet I enjoyed this fun, humorous read with those likable characters. Very good job.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your personalized review, much appreciated.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Wonderful, feel-good humour, a delight to read. I love the characters which you portray so skilfully in their dialogue and the punning is superb. I always come away with a smile on my face too. So your script ticks all the boxes for me. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Wonderful, feel-good humour, a delight to read. I love the characters which you portray so skilfully in their dialogue and the punning is superb. I always come away with a smile on my face too. So your script ticks all the boxes for me. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your very enthusiastic review.
Comment from Begin Again
In dialogue, I believe a character's true nature is revealed more through their words than through the actions the writer assigns them. A story moves smoother and faster through dialogue and you have shown us each of your characters very well. The reference of the way old movies were made - clean and straightforward - not smutty is a nice change. Well done.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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In dialogue, I believe a character's true nature is revealed more through their words than through the actions the writer assigns them. A story moves smoother and faster through dialogue and you have shown us each of your characters very well. The reference of the way old movies were made - clean and straightforward - not smutty is a nice change. Well done.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I must admit I mostly just watch older movies, ha ha.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
What drove you to write a piece like this? A dream? An incantation? Corny is what made Kellogg a lode or cache of coins. Did you ever do vaudeville?
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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What drove you to write a piece like this? A dream? An incantation? Corny is what made Kellogg a lode or cache of coins. Did you ever do vaudeville?
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thanks for your time and review. I actually tried comedy improv for about a month about 18 years ago but decided that I liked writing comedy better. I really like Classic Hollywood movies, Danny Kaye and Abbott and Costello movies and all the comedic TV shows from the 1960s best. The cleaner, the better!
Comment from bonespur
This is a really cute western script. I loved the characters names and how they reference popular actors and other well know characters in popular movies, and/or shows. You did a good job good luck and have a blessed day
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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This is a really cute western script. I loved the characters names and how they reference popular actors and other well know characters in popular movies, and/or shows. You did a good job good luck and have a blessed day
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Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
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You're welcome
Comment from Jacob1395
I love how your character's personalities come through in your dialogue, you do a brilliant job of making them feel like real people and I could really picture the scene before me. I think I particularly like Gus and his sense of humour, you had me smiling a few times when I read his lines of dialogue. I really enjoyed reading your piece.
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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I love how your character's personalities come through in your dialogue, you do a brilliant job of making them feel like real people and I could really picture the scene before me. I think I particularly like Gus and his sense of humour, you had me smiling a few times when I read his lines of dialogue. I really enjoyed reading your piece.
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Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your compliment-filled review. I can tell you took the time to write a thoughtful one.