Coming of Age
a 5-7-514 total reviews
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh my Mystery Poet,
You've really nailed it. Teens are apt, maybe even driven, to do just that. Sometimes, they even join that dark side and become wild things of their own. Your poem is clean and clear. In a few short words, you made your point!
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Oh my Mystery Poet,
You've really nailed it. Teens are apt, maybe even driven, to do just that. Sometimes, they even join that dark side and become wild things of their own. Your poem is clean and clear. In a few short words, you made your point!
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much Rhonda!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love how your poem captures the curiosity and spirit of youth! The line "peek at the dark side" is perfect. It shares a sense of adventure. The balance between innocence and the thrill of the unknown is so well done. Great job!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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I love how your poem captures the curiosity and spirit of youth! The line "peek at the dark side" is perfect. It shares a sense of adventure. The balance between innocence and the thrill of the unknown is so well done. Great job!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you Michael.
Comment from jessizero
I loved the "where the wild things are" picture you included in this poem. The poem itself was great, as well. I liked that bit about "peeking at the dark side." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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I loved the "where the wild things are" picture you included in this poem. The poem itself was great, as well. I liked that bit about "peeking at the dark side." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you Jess!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. This poem takes an accurate look at the teenage years. The bad part isn't the peeking...it's when they go over into the dark side to check things out. Scary times. thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. This poem takes an accurate look at the teenage years. The bad part isn't the peeking...it's when they go over into the dark side to check things out. Scary times. thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you Marilyn.
