Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Chapter 19 B"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
26 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
I knew Galvin was trouble. I can see the actor who will play him in the movie. Lol. He was pretty big in the 90s but that's who I see. Always the bad guy. No idea who he is. I liked how Noah risked missing dinner to apologize. He must really be in love. This was an action packed chapter and a joy to read. Go Jasper!! Gretchen
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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I knew Galvin was trouble. I can see the actor who will play him in the movie. Lol. He was pretty big in the 90s but that's who I see. Always the bad guy. No idea who he is. I liked how Noah risked missing dinner to apologize. He must really be in love. This was an action packed chapter and a joy to read. Go Jasper!! Gretchen
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Well, learn more about Galvin, it'll be a while. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
I loved this chapter. So much drama but then so much romance included. I am trying to get some Youtube video links in here but have not sorted it out, yet. I might send them to you in the other place.
Just one tiny spag.
In title Gal[i]van makes a mistake
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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I loved this chapter. So much drama but then so much romance included. I am trying to get some Youtube video links in here but have not sorted it out, yet. I might send them to you in the other place.
Just one tiny spag.
In title Gal[i]van makes a mistake
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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I sometime leave the 'l' out so this time I just messed up the whole thing. LOL Thank you for the catch. I appreciate it.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Awwww, how sweet!!! I mean, Noah was definitely wrong overreacting the way he did, but at least he was man enough to admit he was wrong and then set things right.
I like it that Jasper was on the job tracking down the illegals, but he wasn't there to help Sami in need. Still, he's doing great!!
Great build up of suspense and creating curiosity as to why that door was left open!!
Great job,
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Awwww, how sweet!!! I mean, Noah was definitely wrong overreacting the way he did, but at least he was man enough to admit he was wrong and then set things right.
I like it that Jasper was on the job tracking down the illegals, but he wasn't there to help Sami in need. Still, he's doing great!!
Great build up of suspense and creating curiosity as to why that door was left open!!
Great job,
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Poor Noah seems to forget himself rathe often and manages to hurt Sami's feelings. She kind of needs to toughen up and expect him to say things he doesn't mean occasionally. He is in a high-pressure job and has a lot of responsibility.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Poor Noah seems to forget himself rathe often and manages to hurt Sami's feelings. She kind of needs to toughen up and expect him to say things he doesn't mean occasionally. He is in a high-pressure job and has a lot of responsibility.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Sami will toughen up. Her entire world is upside down right now. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Whoooo doggies, lots of action in this particular chapter.
I'm not sure where the aliens are from. Didn't miss a chapter did I? I've been camping. A lot this month and working.
Anyhoo, good one!
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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Whoooo doggies, lots of action in this particular chapter.
I'm not sure where the aliens are from. Didn't miss a chapter did I? I've been camping. A lot this month and working.
Anyhoo, good one!
D
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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I don't think you've missed a thing. Crossed over from Eagle Pass. I hope you had fun camping. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
Congratulations on your milestone post! That is truly a wonderful achievement. I enjoyed this chapter, and I am glad your characters are realistic people, who do get angry, make mistakes, need to apologise and to accept apologies. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Congratulations on your milestone post! That is truly a wonderful achievement. I enjoyed this chapter, and I am glad your characters are realistic people, who do get angry, make mistakes, need to apologise and to accept apologies. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the understanding.
Comment from nomi338
I love the reality of this story, the emotions freely expressed. I love the fact that the characters make mistakes, have the maturity to apologize, the heart condition to accept the apology. This is just a very well written and well-presented story.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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I love the reality of this story, the emotions freely expressed. I love the fact that the characters make mistakes, have the maturity to apologize, the heart condition to accept the apology. This is just a very well written and well-presented story.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the understanding.
Comment from lyenochka
Noah has developed more than any of the other characters. He not only became able to express his emotions but now is able to understand himself and his actions. He's asked forgiveness before which makes him a very spiritually mature human being, but now he is able to ask forgiveness and start to forgive himself when he realizes the causes for his actions and receives the forgiveness from the one he loves. I guess that Galvin's mistake has showed us three great strengths - Noah's maturity, Sami's ability to fend for herself, and of course, Jasper, the heroic dog!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Noah has developed more than any of the other characters. He not only became able to express his emotions but now is able to understand himself and his actions. He's asked forgiveness before which makes him a very spiritually mature human being, but now he is able to ask forgiveness and start to forgive himself when he realizes the causes for his actions and receives the forgiveness from the one he loves. I guess that Galvin's mistake has showed us three great strengths - Noah's maturity, Sami's ability to fend for herself, and of course, Jasper, the heroic dog!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Well, learn more about Galvin, it'll be a while. Thank you for the kind review and understanding.
Comment from royowen
I think these two strong human beings Sami and Noah will have to work out some things and boundaries in their relationship, but I guess it may be fun doing, having make up kisses afterward, poor Noah will have to adjust his single life, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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I think these two strong human beings Sami and Noah will have to work out some things and boundaries in their relationship, but I guess it may be fun doing, having make up kisses afterward, poor Noah will have to adjust his single life, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome
Comment from judiverse
Jasper seems to be doing better work that the others. He managed to nab some aliens. Galvin wasn't smart, leaving the open. He also browbeats those under him even though was in the wrong. Maybe Jasper should have gone after him. I don't blame Nah for being angry, especially things like this often happen with Galvin. Noah shouldn't have to spend time apologizing for very little thing that upsets Sami. It's not good if she continues to be upset and hurt over every little thing, and then he has to constantly keep apologizing. I realize this is an unusual situation, when she is in custody for her own well-being. She does act childishly at times. judi
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Jasper seems to be doing better work that the others. He managed to nab some aliens. Galvin wasn't smart, leaving the open. He also browbeats those under him even though was in the wrong. Maybe Jasper should have gone after him. I don't blame Nah for being angry, especially things like this often happen with Galvin. Noah shouldn't have to spend time apologizing for very little thing that upsets Sami. It's not good if she continues to be upset and hurt over every little thing, and then he has to constantly keep apologizing. I realize this is an unusual situation, when she is in custody for her own well-being. She does act childishly at times. judi
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Well, learn more about Galvin, it'll be a while. Thank you for the kind review.