Spirited Justice
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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
::::Garth tipped his cowboy hat to the nurse. "I can, and I already did." Smiling, he added, "You have a nice day, ma'am." His tone left no room for argument.:::::
This is pretty much the way I envision all FBI agents act. LOL Great chapter, Carol. We're really moving along now!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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::::Garth tipped his cowboy hat to the nurse. "I can, and I already did." Smiling, he added, "You have a nice day, ma'am." His tone left no room for argument.:::::
This is pretty much the way I envision all FBI agents act. LOL Great chapter, Carol. We're really moving along now!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thanks, Marilyn. My charming Cowboy probably isn't the typical FBI agent, but I'll take him.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was one heck of a chapter, Carol. I wish I had another six to give you. You have so many branches sprouting of the trunk, I just don't know how you do it. I wish I could be like you. Well, Carlos had everything worked out, didn't he? What a truly devious mind that man has. I don't think I'd be following that SUV after realising he was not being told everything.
And Thomas, will he die under surgery? I can't trust anyone these days! Another fabulous chapter, my clever friend! :)) Love and hugs. Sandra xxx
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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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That was one heck of a chapter, Carol. I wish I had another six to give you. You have so many branches sprouting of the trunk, I just don't know how you do it. I wish I could be like you. Well, Carlos had everything worked out, didn't he? What a truly devious mind that man has. I don't think I'd be following that SUV after realising he was not being told everything.
And Thomas, will he die under surgery? I can't trust anyone these days! Another fabulous chapter, my clever friend! :)) Love and hugs. Sandra xxx
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Carlos may regret his decision...one never knows how far Jose is twisted. And I think Angelo will be checking on Naomi and Eleanor before anything else. but Garth is about to muddy the water because he's headed to the precinct....
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm a little worried about Angelo's ability to follow through. LOL My hero is again in charge. I enjoyed reading.
He interrupted him again. "Carlos doesn't like cleaning up messes. Don't make another one." (again,)
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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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I'm a little worried about Angelo's ability to follow through. LOL My hero is again in charge. I enjoyed reading.
He interrupted him again. "Carlos doesn't like cleaning up messes. Don't make another one." (again,)
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Angelos is getting hit from all sides and his mind is on Naomi and doing what's right for her....Now he knows Carlos didn't trust him enough and Jose slipped through his fingers. Wonder if Carlos will think when his son gets home?
Smiles, Carol