Spirited Justice
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm glad Naomi will get the help she needed. I'm curious is Jose left the key in the car or did he take it with him. Might be interesting to find out. We are hot on the trail. I love it.
I know Crockett, He'll but it off till next week." (he'll)
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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I'm glad Naomi will get the help she needed. I'm curious is Jose left the key in the car or did he take it with him. Might be interesting to find out. We are hot on the trail. I love it.
I know Crockett, He'll but it off till next week." (he'll)
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Somebody is going to be looking for Naomi sooner or later and it should be interesting when they discover the blood and two different DNS samples plus an abandoned car with lots of blood at the end of the alley.....but no bodies!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
Well, I do believe you've used the mob boss's hospital before. You're stories keep overlapping. When you finish a story, it doesn't mean we won't see that character again. It sounds like things are really goint south for Jose. I don't know how Carlos can find out who has his from Mexico but I guess it is possible.
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Well, I do believe you've used the mob boss's hospital before. You're stories keep overlapping. When you finish a story, it doesn't mean we won't see that character again. It sounds like things are really goint south for Jose. I don't know how Carlos can find out who has his from Mexico but I guess it is possible.
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Carlos has people everywhere, and one phone call will have them where he wants them. Angelo will just have to tell them where. It's just a matter of if they can get there fast enough. Yes, Frankie DeVito had the hospital in another story...back a few times. It's fun to intertwine the characters from story to story. Thanks, as always, Beth.
Smiles, Carol