Spirited Justice
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Comment from Harry Craft
As the wheels of the jet left the tarmac. Another great read Carol. I really liked this line describing the jet plane taking off. Very vivid for the reader to imagine. And the way you described the blood as he cut himself on the glass. You really should be working in Hollywood writing movie scripts lol! This is great!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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As the wheels of the jet left the tarmac. Another great read Carol. I really liked this line describing the jet plane taking off. Very vivid for the reader to imagine. And the way you described the blood as he cut himself on the glass. You really should be working in Hollywood writing movie scripts lol! This is great!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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You are gret for my ego, Harry. thank you! I would just like to see my efforts in print...though a movie wouldn't be bad either. LOL For now, I am beyond happy that you and others are enjoying my story. Thanks as always.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Well, Carol. I could see your writing in the movies!
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Thanks, Harry! Now if I could ever get someone to see it!!!!
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You have to market yourself. You can do it!
Comment from Jacob1395
Another excellent chapter, Carol, I can really feel the tension and the urgency building and your writing is brilliant and really engaging as always. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Another excellent chapter, Carol, I can really feel the tension and the urgency building and your writing is brilliant and really engaging as always. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Thanks, Jacob! I'm not moving too fast, am I? I like to keep the action flowing and everyone sitting on the edge of their seats most of the time. Appreciate the comments and the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm glad Garth is 'back' and raring to go again. So are Tango and Poppa. I just hope Thomas will survive that awful attack on him. I think it would be good to put the frighteners on the inmates that did it to him, perhaps a wonderful visit from the one and only Eleanor!!!? Lol. I hope Jose loses a lot more blood and passes out with the key still clutched in his bloody hand. Oh the possibilities are endless!! Another wonderful chapter, my dear friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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I'm glad Garth is 'back' and raring to go again. So are Tango and Poppa. I just hope Thomas will survive that awful attack on him. I think it would be good to put the frighteners on the inmates that did it to him, perhaps a wonderful visit from the one and only Eleanor!!!? Lol. I hope Jose loses a lot more blood and passes out with the key still clutched in his bloody hand. Oh the possibilities are endless!! Another wonderful chapter, my dear friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Yeah, ole Garth just needed Eleanor to give him a swift kick in the butt to get him going. there's quite a few characters in bad shape right now...some desperate people want to close other people's mouths... Thomas, Naomi and maybe Jose.
I think you'll like the chapter I just posted...some more on the edge of your seat stuff.
Smiles, Carol
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I'm off to read it now!! xxx
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Loved the layout on facebook! I shared it so more people might see it! Hugs!!
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Oh, thank you so very much!! You're woderful. 🥰xxx
Comment from Wendy G
Who organised the prisoners to beat up Whittaker?. And now José, in his desperation has left his blood, (and DNA) at the scene of Naomi's attack. The bad thing is that he has the key, but in his present state he may not be up to finding the information and papers he needs. Very well done - an exciting chapter. I am glad Garth is coming on board.
Wendy
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Who organised the prisoners to beat up Whittaker?. And now José, in his desperation has left his blood, (and DNA) at the scene of Naomi's attack. The bad thing is that he has the key, but in his present state he may not be up to finding the information and papers he needs. Very well done - an exciting chapter. I am glad Garth is coming on board.
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Bravo for you girlfriend. I think you are the only one who realized or at least mentione that Jose left his DNA behind. And yes, he has the key and so many others want it from him. Garth's ready to saddle up and leave his mark.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from pome lover
wow, what an intense chapter - my first, in this story. will have to check it out. Your are a good crime writer!
Good grief, I was looking at your cast of characters- immense! I would probably get them all mixed up.
Well from what I read, I liked Garth, but of course, I don't know what's going on. Yet.
Good writing!!!! I am impressed!
Katharine
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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wow, what an intense chapter - my first, in this story. will have to check it out. Your are a good crime writer!
Good grief, I was looking at your cast of characters- immense! I would probably get them all mixed up.
Well from what I read, I liked Garth, but of course, I don't know what's going on. Yet.
Good writing!!!! I am impressed!
Katharine
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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I try to keep only the main characters involved, but I have to list them all if they were in the book. I don't think it would be too confusing. I hope you'll stop by again...
Smiles, Carol
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will do :)
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Garth is very angry but already invested in the cause, Whitaker may be dying of his wounds when attacked in prison, and even Jose is hurting since he was badly beaten. Naomi is missing and maybe dead. It looks as if the answers are getting less likely to be uncovered with so many people injured and maybe dying.
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Garth is very angry but already invested in the cause, Whitaker may be dying of his wounds when attacked in prison, and even Jose is hurting since he was badly beaten. Naomi is missing and maybe dead. It looks as if the answers are getting less likely to be uncovered with so many people injured and maybe dying.
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Garth needed his anger to get back into gear. but he'll settle down once he gets involved. the pots boiling and about to overflow so these good guys better begin to figure things out.
Smiles, Carol