Another Wild Night
Youth getting wild.64 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
Soo glad those days are over. Being around people who can't hold their liquor is tedious at best. This was pretty darned accurate if memory serves me. Drinking until everyone is either sexy or pretty or handsome. Drinking takes those pesky inhibitions away and allows people to make mistakes by the dozens. This was a fun poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Soo glad those days are over. Being around people who can't hold their liquor is tedious at best. This was pretty darned accurate if memory serves me. Drinking until everyone is either sexy or pretty or handsome. Drinking takes those pesky inhibitions away and allows people to make mistakes by the dozens. This was a fun poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Gretchen for the memories! I really appreciate your review!
Comment from Heather Knight
There's a lovely flow and a quick charming rhythm to this poem. I also like the rhymes.
I've never been into wild nights myself, but I understand other people can find them attractive.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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There's a lovely flow and a quick charming rhythm to this poem. I also like the rhymes.
I've never been into wild nights myself, but I understand other people can find them attractive.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Well, thank you so much Heather! I really appreciate your review!
Comment from gansach
This poem has a very nice presentation, the photo is a good illustration. Once again, you have a variety of rhyme schemes and stanza constructions that can be confusing to the reader, but somehow it manages to work together to produce the desired effect. It's evident you love to write and have an innate talent for it even in its unpolished state. Nice work! Best wishes!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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This poem has a very nice presentation, the photo is a good illustration. Once again, you have a variety of rhyme schemes and stanza constructions that can be confusing to the reader, but somehow it manages to work together to produce the desired effect. It's evident you love to write and have an innate talent for it even in its unpolished state. Nice work! Best wishes!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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LOl! Well, thank you gansach. I appreciate your review!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This poem with short lines and end rhymes portrays a young man whose head is full of a little too much of everything, but he is also wrapped up in the attention of an attractive girl. I like the understatement at the end.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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This poem with short lines and end rhymes portrays a young man whose head is full of a little too much of everything, but he is also wrapped up in the attention of an attractive girl. I like the understatement at the end.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Crystie. I really appreciate your review!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Another Wild Night, examines the mind of the intoxicated young man who is realizing that the night has overcome him, but it is yet to end well with the girl.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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This poem, Another Wild Night, examines the mind of the intoxicated young man who is realizing that the night has overcome him, but it is yet to end well with the girl.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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Yes, Bill. You are so right Lol! Thank you for your review!
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed your poem about a Saturday night. I liked your rhymes and varying rhyme scheme, as well. Thank you for sharing this poem here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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I enjoyed your poem about a Saturday night. I liked your rhymes and varying rhyme scheme, as well. Thank you for sharing this poem here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Well, thank you Jessi. I really appreciate that!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm sure this poem/song took many on FS back to their wild days in the 60s and 70s. It was a wild time and a fun time. I enjoyed reading this Harry, it was a good fun poem. Well done, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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I'm sure this poem/song took many on FS back to their wild days in the 60s and 70s. It was a wild time and a fun time. I enjoyed reading this Harry, it was a good fun poem. Well done, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Well, thank you Sandra. I actually wrote this in the late 70's during Disco and just recently presented it. Thank you for your insight and review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from Janet Foor
"Another wild Night" tells quite a story in a lyrical fashion that when read aloud sounds like it could be out to music.
Good job with this fun poem Harry.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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"Another wild Night" tells quite a story in a lyrical fashion that when read aloud sounds like it could be out to music.
Good job with this fun poem Harry.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Janet. I wrote this in the late 70's during Disco. So, I guess it could be a song!
Comment from lyenochka
Your poem reads like a song. And it brings to mind lyrics of Jimmy Buffet. I wonder who the "she" is whether it's someone he came to the bar with or the waitress. Hope that the next day clears things up for them both!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Your poem reads like a song. And it brings to mind lyrics of Jimmy Buffet. I wonder who the "she" is whether it's someone he came to the bar with or the waitress. Hope that the next day clears things up for them both!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Lyenochka. I actually wrote this during the 70's during Disco. So, I guess it could be a song.
Comment from godlucifer
nothing like a party on a saturday night. the wild,the craziest,and the youthful feeling on a saturday night. your poem was truly written from your heart. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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nothing like a party on a saturday night. the wild,the craziest,and the youthful feeling on a saturday night. your poem was truly written from your heart. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Yes, it was written for the youth. Thanks again, godlucifer for your review. I really appreciate that!