2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 62 "All I Can Ask For"*
18 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is heartfelt and real. The sound of a child's laughter is like no other. A person cannot help but to smile and laugh along.
Fantastic photo choice. Well done. A pleasure to read. Xo. M
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is heartfelt and real. The sound of a child's laughter is like no other. A person cannot help but to smile and laugh along.
Fantastic photo choice. Well done. A pleasure to read. Xo. M
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
O, the laughter of children, and to be so young again! Such innocent joy that is indeed divinely inspired. I love this one very much, the colors and presentation are so vividly expressed. This to me is a six, but I have ran out.
Well done, well done.
RJ
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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O, the laughter of children, and to be so young again! Such innocent joy that is indeed divinely inspired. I love this one very much, the colors and presentation are so vividly expressed. This to me is a six, but I have ran out.
Well done, well done.
RJ
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
This is a pleasure to listen to. I wish you the very best with your writing. I also admire you for your presentations as they are always very beautiful. Patricia.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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This is a pleasure to listen to. I wish you the very best with your writing. I also admire you for your presentations as they are always very beautiful. Patricia.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Katiemae1977
This is delightful Gypsy. I particularly like children's laughter.
Your tanka is clear, concise.and has good grammatical interconnection between lines.
Great job!
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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This is delightful Gypsy. I particularly like children's laughter.
Your tanka is clear, concise.and has good grammatical interconnection between lines.
Great job!
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I think those four requests are all most of us could possibly wish for: love, faith, nature's beauty and children's laughter. So simple and yet so profound, complemented with a delightful image. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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I think those four requests are all most of us could possibly wish for: love, faith, nature's beauty and children's laughter. So simple and yet so profound, complemented with a delightful image. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
What an adorable and so, so, innocent, the accompanying dogs who usually adore children are a natural part of kid's activities and, these kids are going to be in big trouble heh heh, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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What an adorable and so, so, innocent, the accompanying dogs who usually adore children are a natural part of kid's activities and, these kids are going to be in big trouble heh heh, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed your tanka. The message is very much like that of the cinquain you wrote. I love the picture of the children who have been enjoying playing in the mud
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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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I enjoyed your tanka. The message is very much like that of the cinquain you wrote. I love the picture of the children who have been enjoying playing in the mud
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Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
how'd you do that to the bottom of the picture - with just a feet??
totally cool look!
great fun-filled tanka full of innocent joy flowing smoothly with laughter and giggles...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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how'd you do that to the bottom of the picture - with just a feet??
totally cool look!
great fun-filled tanka full of innocent joy flowing smoothly with laughter and giggles...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. Have a happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs
