Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

This is a very interesting poem. The poem itself is well written and the subject suggests the rules he wants are not for him, only the rest of America. I thought his middle wife was an American mongrel like most of us. His mother looks strangely like his first wife. It would be interesting to find out if his parents were active members of the American Nazi party in the 1930s.

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024

Yes that would be interesting to find out. Perhaps I can do some research on that.

Thank you for your wonderful review and your excellent rating

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024

I cannot find no evidence that any of the trumps were part of the American Nazi party

reply by Carol Hillebrenner on 14-Aug-2024

They might have been too smart for that, but they sure had the attitude. There was a fascinating program on PBS about the Nazis in America during the thirties and early forties, but they quickly disappeared by about 1944.

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

My friend, you have delivered a relatable piece with flawless meter and rhyme. I was unaware that Trump used the chain migration for his wives. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024

Thank you Steve for these lovely comments and your excellent rating

reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024

Thank you Steve for these lovely comments and your excellent rating

reply by Neonewman on 13-Aug-2024

Always a pleasure, my friend.

Comment from Aussie

Excellent

I thought Melania was Slovakian? Where was Trump born? A very in depth rant about the Trump family and what he will do if he succeeds in being elected (pray not) he will turn America into a socialist republic and get rid of the blacks. Thanks for sharing. K xx

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024

Even though it probably wasn't appropriate. Your review made me laugh. As scary as it is it's not a laughable matter. I just pray that he doesn't become president again because he's a danger not only to our country but to the entire world.

RCA killed President Kennedy because he was a danger to national security. He was going to use nuclear weapons against Cuba because of the pig incident where Russia put nuclear weapons aimed at the US in Cuba.

Trump is a danger to national security as he's proven in the moral Mar A Lago documents case. Where he stole a bunch of top-secret security documents and took them to his residence there and then showed them off to his friends. Some of them had information that could get people killed, and that could jeopardize our national security.

I think that should become president to have to
kill him. I would not share a single tear unless it's a happy tear

Thank you for this review, which both depressed me and embolden me. You didn't depress me. The thought of him being present again is what depressed me.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Bravo, Pam, your post is exceptional, I wish I had a six.

There are a lot of Trump supporters in fanstory, you are a brave lady.

You are right, trumps policy on immigration is very
hypocritical.

Trump is such a horrible person.... so many things are wrong with him I don't even know where to start so I will keep it short. He's a bigot, rapist, convicted felon, crooked businessman, etc...

Well done, Pam, so well written.

Gypsy

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024

Yeah. is everything that he calls immigrants from the southern border. I would even go as far as the same murderer because of that mass murder at the El Paso grocery store. The guy that did that did it for Trump. He said so himself or at least he said he did it because of what Trump said. I put the responsibility for the deaths of those souls directly in trump's hands.

Thanks much for the read and review

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, About Chain Migration, follows the history of the former president's family's use of the system to bring the otherwise unimpressive Trumps to America.

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024

, you had me laughing out loud you're so funny

Thanks for this funny review that made me laugh

Comment from forestport12

Excellent

Good bit of history. You did the research. But Donald Trump is not prejudice. Ask the blacks who know him best.

He's not for borders unsecure when others south of here wait in line, do it right, it takes time, but there are those across illegally, because like you, they think one should just climb the fence or dig a hole and be rewarded as some crucified soul.

Jesus has walls around heaven. Heaven has a border. Do you know how to get in heaven? Jesus said I am the door. I think Jesus would say, "We will always have the poor, come unto me, and I will give your rest.

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024

Trump closed all the ways that immigrants could come in legally. So they're setting across the border being taken advantage of by coyotes and human trafficking and running out of money so they felt they had no choice, but to come in illegally because there was no way they could come in legally.

I know that the vast majority of them are just fleeing economic uncertainty, in their countries. But the central American countries like Honduras have the highest murder rate per capita in the world. They force Young boys and into gangs or they will kill their families like I said, girls are forced into human trafficking rings. They rape them and they kill some of them too. But they're worth more alive for human trafficking

I believe they should come in the legal way also but when there is no way to do that they're going to get desperate

At the same time that Trump was railing about, not allowing chain migration anymore, he brought Melania's parents as under chain migration into this country. That's what makes me think. He was only against migration for certain immigrants, not all immigrants. I think those immigrants from our southern border it's possible it's also true for African countries. I'm not sure.

he calls the immigrants.vermin
he calls them rapist and murderers when it has been proven over and over again that immigrants commit less crime than Americans native born

so a guy took his AK-47 and killed 43 people in an El Paso grocery store. I think it was Walmart.

Some of them may have been legal immigrants others.may have been illegal immigrants, and some of them may have been American citizens

he said the reason he did it was because of what Trump said. So Trump's not being arrested for those deaths, but he caused them.

And I agree there are a few token blacks who
like him because they want the power that he can get

And both the white and Black people who
hold those signs and jump up and down, they're all paid to do that

so we're not that far apart at this point in time since we're not going to
have one world and since the US has made so many enemies by their constant wars, we can't have one
world because terrorists would want to blow us up

Since we don't have one world, and because we're a target for terrorism we should enforce that you have to come in legally But we have to have a way that people can do that not shut down all of the apparatus that would allow them to do it.

we are not that far apart

Thank you for your thought-provoking review and I like having the discussion with you Having
different opinions is not an obstacle to me. I have family members who are for Trump.

reply by forestport12 on 14-Aug-2024

Just remember, those illegals who lived in sanctuary cities and were not properly vetted, who in turn raped. Kamala owns that, and the coyotes have increased human trafficking, not decreased, so the fact is someone who is for women rights has more rape, murder, and her own disregard for women to own. I happen to go to a church that puts money into Honduras, and DR etc.. and missionaries on the ground. There's this self-righteous virus going around. I get it, if you want to tell me how not good Trump is, but don't sell me on how Kamala is protecting thousands of children who can't be found that came across and can't be found or protected. No one is righteous here.

reply by forestport12 on 14-Aug-2024

You really need to see the world away from the main media narrative and come to my church. I'm one of thousands across the country that have like 20% black and some more, evangelicals, yes. Black yes. And the ones you see, I know for a fact personally, a few of them and their testimony, and are not paid! Visit my church, and in addition Hispanic families who will tell you how they feel. And we don't vote for a Sunday School teacher, we vote for someone who protects our 1st and 2nd ammendment.

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024

Hi. I'd like to understand what you're saying here. I don't know where you're going with this.

Are you talking about racial discrimination. It sounds like it's not true in your church, but that doesn't mean it wasn't true for Fred Trump.
and his son were fined.multiple times for it

That's a fact

I appreciate your thought-provoking review. I would like to know more about what you're saying.

Thank for dharing a different point of view

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

This poem has a good sense of rhythm and rhyme.
Favorite lines:
Descendants never felt the pain;
how hard it was to start again.

I am very pro-legal immigration and very anti-illegal immigration. I am not going to mention current or past politicians' names.
It is my opinion that no matter who is in charge, there ought to be criminal background checks. That goes for whoever is coming into a country, and whoever ends up sponsoring new immigrants as well.
I just met two young children who were victims of a pedophile ring. Too open of borders contribute to too much organized (and unorganized) crime. Drug cartels should not be in charge of immigration. I wanted to report a drug dealer once who was in the country illegally, but I was told that if I did, the people he worked for would come after me, and this was over twenty years ago. But I have also had friends who were here illegally, and as long as they were not using someone else's Social Security numbers or committing crimes, I was extremely inclined to work with them as long as they were just trying to work things out as well. Maybe someone ought to write a poem or a piece about legally sponsoring immigrants instead of the way things stand now.

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024

I might just write that poem if you tell me a bit more. Enough to point me to some articles with facts

During the Trump years he closed all the legal entry points. so immigrants across the border who were being taken advantage of and harassed by coyotes and drug cartels felt like they had no other option than to come in illegally, because there was no way to come in legally

I agree with you that we need to strengthen background checks and that wanting a better job is not a reason for immigrating or allowing someone in here. Most of the immigrants on our southern border are from central America and they're fleeing death literally death for themselves and their children. Honduras has the highest murder rate in the world per capita, and othrr central American countries aren't far behind Honduras boys are forced to join gangs or they get killed and their families killed. Girls are raped or sold into human trafficking rings and/or killed. Sending them back would mean certain death because they dared to flee

I wrote a poem on refugees too. It's pretty recent and it dealt with not the southern border but with 900 Jewish refugees who came here in 1939 and we turned them back and so did Cuba and Canada. They even appealed to Franklin Roosevelt, and he just never answered them, 300 of them later died In concentration camps. it also dealt with this little three-year-old boy. He and his father were fleeing from the war in Syria Their boat capsized, and the little boy drowned, and later his body washed up on the beach

We need more immigration judges, so that the backlog of cases can be heard and asylum given or rejected

thank you for your thoughtful review thought-provoking questions and excellent rating

reply by CrystieCookie999 on 14-Aug-2024

I don't know much about what is available in my home state of Utah, other than that the city of Midvale that is next to my city is often called "Little Mexico" because it now has about70- 80% of its population with first, second, or third generation immigrants, largely from Mexico and other Spanish-speaking countries. I looked up Ohio, though, since I enter their poetry contest every year, so here is one link that looked well-organized:
https://jfs.ohio.gov/cash-food-and-refugee-assistance/cash-assistance/cash-programs/refugee-cash-assistance

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

I loved your poem, Pam, and the word has to be spread. He's dangerous, and a parasite. We're all in danger from him and his likes. I'm following the the election with great interest. Ulla xcx

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024

Well at least Kamala is gaining in the polls

We hope to God that he does not get elected again. We'll no longer have a democracy if that happens. he has some secretaries of state who claim that they will not certify the election if he loses. And some of those are in swing states. He will do everything in his power, including cheating to get elected because otherwise he'll have to face justice.

Thank you for your review and your excellent rating

reply by Ulla on 13-Aug-2024

Absolutely, the last he would want is to lose, because then comes payday. I cross my fingers for Kamala. xcx

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this beautifully written poem with us. As Paul Harvey used to say, "And the rest of the story...."

if Jesus came here from the south, (If)

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024

Thank you. I'll take a look at that if. And thank you for your great review and excellent rating

Comment from Samantha Wymer

Excellent

I like your poem because it's based on true facts of what's going on in the world today. This country is build on immigrants. A country for a all in my opinion. Great poem

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024

Thank you for your wonderful comments and excellent rating