Blessed with Beauty
A farm boy expresses his happiness.16 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Blessed with Beauty, pulls the abundance of beauty from the surroundings and expands the heart as one considers the joyous situation of labor, freedom, and love for all that is here.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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This poem, Blessed with Beauty, pulls the abundance of beauty from the surroundings and expands the heart as one considers the joyous situation of labor, freedom, and love for all that is here.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill, for sharing my poem.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Happy Poems writing prompt. Is there any place happier than a country field in the summer time? This reminds me of the fields I played in growing up in Wisconsin. You couldn't help but look up and say thank you. Nice job.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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An excellent entry for the Happy Poems writing prompt. Is there any place happier than a country field in the summer time? This reminds me of the fields I played in growing up in Wisconsin. You couldn't help but look up and say thank you. Nice job.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Marilyn. I am glad I could put you back on that Wisconsin farm.
Comment from mermaids
Your vivid use of words takes the reader out into nature and like the farm boy, one has a break from the world to take in nature's beauty. Love your first verse where the flowers are like live characters having fun. There is definitely a good feeling in your words.
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Your vivid use of words takes the reader out into nature and like the farm boy, one has a break from the world to take in nature's beauty. Love your first verse where the flowers are like live characters having fun. There is definitely a good feeling in your words.
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Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much, mermaids. Glad I could put you in those fields with the boy and those flowers.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A very pleasing poem full of nature's joyous scenes. Clever rhymes and metre and your presentation is a good entry for the contest, I felt the happiness in the sentiments here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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A very pleasing poem full of nature's joyous scenes. Clever rhymes and metre and your presentation is a good entry for the contest, I felt the happiness in the sentiments here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Dolly, for this wonderful review and all those stars. I am delighted you felt the happiness of the scene.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I enjoyed this poem because it's about nature. I often write about nature, but I can't be in nature anymore because of my disabilities.
I like the image you chose It fits the poem very well
My husband's grandfather owned a farm in New Hampshire in the US
My husband, as a little boy, would go visit him and he made my husband feel special
He let him drive the tractor drive the truck and just explore like a little boy does
So I think some of the feelings you have, my husband might've shared. I have never been on a farm so I only know it from movies and TVs and through what my husband has told me and now what you have told me.
I appreciate the education
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I enjoyed this poem because it's about nature. I often write about nature, but I can't be in nature anymore because of my disabilities.
I like the image you chose It fits the poem very well
My husband's grandfather owned a farm in New Hampshire in the US
My husband, as a little boy, would go visit him and he made my husband feel special
He let him drive the tractor drive the truck and just explore like a little boy does
So I think some of the feelings you have, my husband might've shared. I have never been on a farm so I only know it from movies and TVs and through what my husband has told me and now what you have told me.
I appreciate the education
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much, Pamusart, for taking the time to share your comments about my poem and farm life.
Comment from Chip Whitley
A wonderfully written expression of scenery and the Earth. I enjoyed the author's perspective on the tinting of the clouds. I felt like I could reach up and touch it. Thank your for your contribution.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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A wonderfully written expression of scenery and the Earth. I enjoyed the author's perspective on the tinting of the clouds. I felt like I could reach up and touch it. Thank your for your contribution.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much, Chip, for your enthusiastic response to my poem. I am delighted I could put you there with those tinted clouds. I also much appreciate those six bright stars.