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what's on your mind tonight

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Comment from Nicki.B
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This is so good! I was giggling right through, the image is hilarious and the words you've put together with the innuendos are so funny. I mean come on, Elvis as a banana how could you not find this funny!

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much Nicki! Banana Elvis will be back...
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reply by Nicki.B on 31-Jul-2024
    Haha! Love it!
Comment from royowen
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A beautifully written poem, and a real treat to read and hilariously scribed, an unusual post and the great humour gives a leg up, I'm impressed by the ease with which this saucy entry in this contest has gone, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
    Roy, thank you for the incredibly kind words. It was a real fun one to write.
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reply by royowen on 31-Jul-2024
    Well done
Comment from Jacob1395
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I thought this was really well written and I liked how you put your poem together. I could really get a sense of the excitement and sense of anticipation as well as I was reading. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
    Thank you Jacob. The only thing more exciting than a dancing Banana Elvis is a dancing gorilla.
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Comment from Begin Again
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I definitely thought of it as a song...not my type but great for some... as I read it. It definitely has a message to deliver and some girls might jump on it and others just prefer to dance.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
    As of yesterday morning a song is now actually in progress, and somewhat of in the style of Elvis, with a modern twist. Thank you Carol!
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Comment from Barry Penfold
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totally a fun poem. Love the image and of course it had to have the sexual vibe. I like this. Thanks for sharing and all the best for the contest. Take care and have a great day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.

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 Comment Written 29-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much Barry!
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Comment from Earl Corp
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This is nan awesome picture you chose to accompany your poem. Unfortunately it gave away the punchline. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and was funny. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 29-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much. Somehow I pulled off a win with it. No one can resist Banana Elvis!
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