Spirited Justice
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Comment from royowen
It looks like the beginning of a new book, that you are cooking Carol, you're really burning as an author of great stories, I admire your work, your heart is similar to mine, you want evil to depart this world, and love and goodness to take its rightful place, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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It looks like the beginning of a new book, that you are cooking Carol, you're really burning as an author of great stories, I admire your work, your heart is similar to mine, you want evil to depart this world, and love and goodness to take its rightful place, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Exactly! My wish is for everyone to be happy and share that happiness with others. thank you for being so kind to me. I appreciate it beyond words.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Yes, I agree wholeheartedly,
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This looks to be a good one. So many ways to go. Will Paula Pogletti, contestant from New Jersey in 1995 have closure? Will they find out that when she threw up her lighted baton into the air, that Tommy Angelo ( her ex- boyfriend) caught it and sent back the dynamite? Soooooo many questions. :-)
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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This looks to be a good one. So many ways to go. Will Paula Pogletti, contestant from New Jersey in 1995 have closure? Will they find out that when she threw up her lighted baton into the air, that Tommy Angelo ( her ex- boyfriend) caught it and sent back the dynamite? Soooooo many questions. :-)
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Glad to hear every thing is going well for you and packing is getting done. Thank you for taking the time to read the prologue of my next book. I hope you'll be settled so you can read it and enjoy.
Smiles, Carol
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My interest is sparked, and I still have your other things t read. And,,,,unpacking.:-)
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This sounds like a rather long blurb for a great story, or it could be a prologue. I know I want to read it because I have to find out how the father of the dead girl ended up in prison. You are off to a great start.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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This sounds like a rather long blurb for a great story, or it could be a prologue. I know I want to read it because I have to find out how the father of the dead girl ended up in prison. You are off to a great start.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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It's the prologue to the story. Chapter One is sitting and waiting to get under way. A few of our characters returning and few new ones should make it an interesting story I hope. Thanks for starting another one with me.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I see Matthew will have role in this murder mystery, as will Eleanor and Jenna. Hmm, maybe Jenna and Matthew become closer than friends. Hmmm. I can't wait to read more.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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I see Matthew will have role in this murder mystery, as will Eleanor and Jenna. Hmm, maybe Jenna and Matthew become closer than friends. Hmmm. I can't wait to read more.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Since this is an international pageant, MAYBE GArth will wonder into the story as well as we get deeper into it. I know that will make you happy. I think you might also enjoy the new addition..Helen's granddaughter who Eleanor has taken under her wing. Should be interesting.
Smiles, Carol
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I had already thought of my handsome cowboy. LOL I know I'll enjoy it.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Oh boy. I'm just in time for a brand new story. Let's go! It sound intriguing and I love a good mystery, especially when it's wrapped up in a glamorous setting. Anxious to read more.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Oh boy. I'm just in time for a brand new story. Let's go! It sound intriguing and I love a good mystery, especially when it's wrapped up in a glamorous setting. Anxious to read more.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thanks for joining, Marilyn. This story will have several of the characters from the last story because the readers have asked me to continue...different plat but same fun! I hope you enjoy it!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
It seems that ghosts play a part in almost everything these days, with your third story in a row. Which leads me to believe there might be some internal backstory at work here. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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It seems that ghosts play a part in almost everything these days, with your third story in a row. Which leads me to believe there might be some internal backstory at work here. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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You might be striking a chord or two, my dear. But what ever is happening, I am thrilled and happy to be writing furiously again. the deeper I get into writing, the easier it is to shut out the darkness that lurks around me. I'm all sunshine and happiness today!
Smiles, Carol
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You're always sunshine and happiness to me every day. And as I've said many times, your writing is good as it gets to me. Always wishing you the best! Ric
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Aaww! You are to sweet!
Comment from BethShelby
This is a great prologue for new book. Your mind never takes a break. The prologue make is sound like something I have to read. I can't wait to get started.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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This is a great prologue for new book. Your mind never takes a break. The prologue make is sound like something I have to read. I can't wait to get started.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Hurrah! Me either! I sat here (after cutting trees for three days after the storm) and couldn't stand not posting the end of the story....so I started thinking and another one said let's go! I hope you like this one as it develops as well as the last. Thank you, Beth!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from tfawcus
Goodness ! It doesn't take you long to get started again. This sounds like a rip-roaring yarn. Glad to see that Eleanor Bennett has wafted into the cast list to work a bit more magic!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Goodness ! It doesn't take you long to get started again. This sounds like a rip-roaring yarn. Glad to see that Eleanor Bennett has wafted into the cast list to work a bit more magic!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Of course, I just couldn't let her go, Tony. she cast a sweet spell on my heart and I hope the hearts of my readers as well. And now she has brought her granddaughter along for the ride as well... a spicey throwback to say the least.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ginda Simpson
This will certainly lure your readers to investigate this sinister plot with you. Your prologue presents an intriguing mystery to be solved, with an interesting array of characters.
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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This will certainly lure your readers to investigate this sinister plot with you. Your prologue presents an intriguing mystery to be solved, with an interesting array of characters.
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Good morning!
Thank you for stopping by to read this prologue of what's to come in the story. I hope it made you interested to find what what happens. Thank you so much for your kindness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
WHAT? Another book already! How has your mind not needed some thinking time? Or recovery time from your extreme work of the last month? This promises to be exciting and compelling too. Can't wait to see how this one unfolds.
Well written first chapter - plenty of hooks here.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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WHAT? Another book already! How has your mind not needed some thinking time? Or recovery time from your extreme work of the last month? This promises to be exciting and compelling too. Can't wait to see how this one unfolds.
Well written first chapter - plenty of hooks here.
Wendy
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Well, I was riding this high and had finished Unfinished Brushstrokes in advance and the exhilaration just made me keep writing. I will try to take this one at a slower pace, but I can't promise anything. LOL Besides, I couldn't let my characters go.
Smiles, Carol