Unfinished Brushstrokes
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Comment from karenina
Eleanor is quite the ghostly imp! I chuckled as she "disarmed" Donatelli's pen and wrote "Truth"; his reaction when he heard her speak was priceless!
For a woman who was murdered she seems to be enjoying using her "spirit" wiles to guide the detective...and whoops, watch out Trevor! I think maybe he's going to have a non-drug-induced "hallucination!"
Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Eleanor is quite the ghostly imp! I chuckled as she "disarmed" Donatelli's pen and wrote "Truth"; his reaction when he heard her speak was priceless!
For a woman who was murdered she seems to be enjoying using her "spirit" wiles to guide the detective...and whoops, watch out Trevor! I think maybe he's going to have a non-drug-induced "hallucination!"
Karenina
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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I'm having fun with Eleanor....She was ignored in life and now it's her turn to ruffle a few feathers and make them wonder. I'd love to come back as Eleanor!
Smiles, hugs and love...Carol
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You've got to love a spunky ghost!
Comment from lyenochka
Eleanor is having way too much fun with her ghostly powers. Hopefully this encounter will make Donatelli more willing to work with Garth and the two can give Eleanor the justice she's seeking.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Eleanor is having way too much fun with her ghostly powers. Hopefully this encounter will make Donatelli more willing to work with Garth and the two can give Eleanor the justice she's seeking.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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I think we will still have some fireworks before the two getting donwn to working together but I gues that's to be expected when you put two stubborn men together. LOL Thanks for the review and comments, Helen.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I am loving this! I hope it will be possible to come back and stay a while. there are a few people I'd like to visit!! Now she is whispering in Donatelli's ears, Lol. I'm sure that would be fun. This has been such a light-hearted fun chapter, I really enjoyed the giggles you gave me. I can't wait for the next chapter. You're doing well, my friend. :)) Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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I am loving this! I hope it will be possible to come back and stay a while. there are a few people I'd like to visit!! Now she is whispering in Donatelli's ears, Lol. I'm sure that would be fun. This has been such a light-hearted fun chapter, I really enjoyed the giggles you gave me. I can't wait for the next chapter. You're doing well, my friend. :)) Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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I would like to be able to come back and haunt a few people too.LOL I had fun with this chapter of course. It's fun to have Eleanor teasing or scaring people, especially those who ignored her when she was alive.
Smiles, Carol
PS...poste another chapter. lol
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I'll go and read it now! xxxxx
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I can't wait to see what you think. Love ya!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It really wasn't nice of Eleanor to assist Matthew. He's too hunky for that to happen. LOL I am loving this. Thank you for sharing it. This is a great write.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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It really wasn't nice of Eleanor to assist Matthew. He's too hunky for that to happen. LOL I am loving this. Thank you for sharing it. This is a great write.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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She hasn't met Garth yet! Do you think he will believe she is exists? Donatelli wasn't sure but the Cowboy is even tougher.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
ELeanor's ghost is makeing the rounds. She shook up Michael and she is heading to jail to deal with her grandson. He'll probably think it is drugs and lack of them, which is making him see a ghost.
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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ELeanor's ghost is makeing the rounds. She shook up Michael and she is heading to jail to deal with her grandson. He'll probably think it is drugs and lack of them, which is making him see a ghost.
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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I think Eleanor everything's fair game. She's already dead so what can anyone do to her? And if they say they saw a ghost... now who is going to believe that?
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your writing is continues to have such intrigue. The way you weave together the mundane and the supernatural keeps me hooked from start to finish. The dialogue flows naturally. The subtle hints of mystery and the eerie occurrences builds suspense. I'm eager to uncover the secrets hidden in this story. Well done!
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Your writing is continues to have such intrigue. The way you weave together the mundane and the supernatural keeps me hooked from start to finish. The dialogue flows naturally. The subtle hints of mystery and the eerie occurrences builds suspense. I'm eager to uncover the secrets hidden in this story. Well done!
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Wow! Thank you! Writing mystery and crime has always been my genre but I recently added ghosts to it. It's been fun though I am never sure where it's headed. thank you for your kind review and comments. I feel blessed when others enjoy my efforts.
Smiles, Carol