Love Nest
Built for a lifetime17 total reviews
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I really enjoyed your love poem, using the analogy of the bird nest all the way. Your last line sealed it perfectly. I hope it does very well in the Love Poem Poetry Contest. It's hard to write a love poem that isn't sappy, but you did it with excellence.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I really enjoyed your love poem, using the analogy of the bird nest all the way. Your last line sealed it perfectly. I hope it does very well in the Love Poem Poetry Contest. It's hard to write a love poem that isn't sappy, but you did it with excellence.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you for reviewing, for your kind feedback, and for the six stars. Very much appreciated.
Comment from Begin Again
Beautiful and moving. Your words are really mushy, yet they build a picture, slowly, showing the progression of love - building the nest and the relationship one small step at a time until their trust in each other is bound tight.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Beautiful and moving. Your words are really mushy, yet they build a picture, slowly, showing the progression of love - building the nest and the relationship one small step at a time until their trust in each other is bound tight.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Carol, for your kind words.
Comment from Sally Law
Virtual six as I am already out on Wednesday. A beautiful poem of the love nest and loving life you lead. Now, you're always there for him. A poem that will certainly move the judges. One can hope.
Sending you my best today as always and my best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal Xos
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Virtual six as I am already out on Wednesday. A beautiful poem of the love nest and loving life you lead. Now, you're always there for him. A poem that will certainly move the judges. One can hope.
Sending you my best today as always and my best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal Xos
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much, Sally, for your positive comments and good wishes. So much appreciated.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a wonderful poem. Your beautifully capture love with your words. I love your progression from softly and quietly entering into a relationship, to bravely and deliberately building a nest. I love your word choices including "always there for me". I like how your poem celebrates the security found in a cherished partner. Well done!
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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What a wonderful poem. Your beautifully capture love with your words. I love your progression from softly and quietly entering into a relationship, to bravely and deliberately building a nest. I love your word choices including "always there for me". I like how your poem celebrates the security found in a cherished partner. Well done!
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Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Michael, for such a positive review. I really appreciate your feedback.
Comment from Wendy G
This is incredibly beautiful! Birds do I believe remain faithful for life, a picture of love and trust as he prepares the nest for the female and together they create and nurture life. I also see spiritual layers to it, which are subtle but thought-provoking. Well done Ginda! I enjoyed this one a lot.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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This is incredibly beautiful! Birds do I believe remain faithful for life, a picture of love and trust as he prepares the nest for the female and together they create and nurture life. I also see spiritual layers to it, which are subtle but thought-provoking. Well done Ginda! I enjoyed this one a lot.
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Wendy, for the review and the six stars. Mike just had a six star review at his neuro exam. Holding steady.
Comment from Mintybee
This is a beautiful love poem. The bird imagery works very well to show your feelings about the relationship. The repetition at the end makes the reader slow down and absorb the point before the question at the end. Well done.
Mintybee
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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This is a beautiful love poem. The bird imagery works very well to show your feelings about the relationship. The repetition at the end makes the reader slow down and absorb the point before the question at the end. Well done.
Mintybee
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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I so appreciate your review of my poem, pointing out what makes it works. This is how we learn. Thank you.
Comment from RodG
This is the kind of love poem I wish I could write. Not sappy or maudlin, but honest using simple words to describe a lover that "built a nest" beneath the Speaker's heart and "feathered it with trust and strength" throughout their years together. Tender, this poem really moved me.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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This is the kind of love poem I wish I could write. Not sappy or maudlin, but honest using simple words to describe a lover that "built a nest" beneath the Speaker's heart and "feathered it with trust and strength" throughout their years together. Tender, this poem really moved me.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Rod, for your kind words and the six stars for my poem. I am glad that it spoke to you.
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You are very welcome.
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You are very welcome.
