The Words
Inspiring a dream.26 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
I'm amazed at how your poetry melodically flows into, and expresses your thoughts and feelings. Your artwork and words, especially, provided vivid imagery that dreams are made of. I enjoyed with beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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I'm amazed at how your poetry melodically flows into, and expresses your thoughts and feelings. Your artwork and words, especially, provided vivid imagery that dreams are made of. I enjoyed with beautiful poem.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Oh I so appreciate your review! You made my day!
Comment from lyenochka
This is beautiful. From the start you had me feeling the mix of senses (synesthesia) of the what is audible being felt in the mind. And I wonder if this is addressed to a poet whose words touched you and there was a soul to soul connection upon reading that poet's words. Virtual six!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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This is beautiful. From the start you had me feeling the mix of senses (synesthesia) of the what is audible being felt in the mind. And I wonder if this is addressed to a poet whose words touched you and there was a soul to soul connection upon reading that poet's words. Virtual six!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much! There was a poet who reviewed all of my poems in one day, so I write this about her. Thanks again!
Comment from Daylily
This is so positive and its a delight to read through every line. I love uplifting works and you have succeeded here beautifully. Thank you for sharing this, Jodi, and enhancing my day. :-)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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This is so positive and its a delight to read through every line. I love uplifting works and you have succeeded here beautifully. Thank you for sharing this, Jodi, and enhancing my day. :-)
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Oh thank you so much! I really appreciate you enjoying my poem, and glad I could enhance your day!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, Jodi.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening verse with
the addition of alliteration, and I
particularly like the first line.
-A very good second verse that shows
where your feelings of love came from
and how sharing your words was meaningful to you.
-Very good descriptive detail about the stars,
and a very good closing verse that shows
how your "knowledge bloomed. Very nice
use of alliteration in this verse, as well.
-Very well written. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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-Very nice image and presentation, Jodi.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening verse with
the addition of alliteration, and I
particularly like the first line.
-A very good second verse that shows
where your feelings of love came from
and how sharing your words was meaningful to you.
-Very good descriptive detail about the stars,
and a very good closing verse that shows
how your "knowledge bloomed. Very nice
use of alliteration in this verse, as well.
-Very well written. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you for reading and enjoying my poem. I appreciate all your nice comments!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from gansach
This is a very nice poem and a great presentation. It has a nice flow, and good rhyming and meter. The accompanying photo complements it nicely. I enjoyed reading it. Well done!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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This is a very nice poem and a great presentation. It has a nice flow, and good rhyming and meter. The accompanying photo complements it nicely. I enjoyed reading it. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much for your nice review! I appreciate you reading and enjoying it!
Comment from Begin Again
I wish I could be a poet and express myself as you do! Instead I need pages and pages to ramble about my thoughts. It's a beautiful thought and you make it flow like a gentle river or a song. I enjoyed it!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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I wish I could be a poet and express myself as you do! Instead I need pages and pages to ramble about my thoughts. It's a beautiful thought and you make it flow like a gentle river or a song. I enjoyed it!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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You are so kind Carol! Thanks for the beautiful comments!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Your poems flow like music. Are you a musician? This is lilting and romantic and enigmatic and so thoroughly enjoyable. Thank you for this delightful read this evening!! xo
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Your poems flow like music. Are you a musician? This is lilting and romantic and enigmatic and so thoroughly enjoyable. Thank you for this delightful read this evening!! xo
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much Rachelle! I?m not a musician, but somehow the words just appear! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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A natural writer, then! Even more impressive. xo
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Oh you are so sweet, and funny since I just recently started writing poetry. I appreciate you!
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No; some things are just "in there," or they're not. For you, they're definitely "in there."
Comment from QC Poet
Your poem does a Great job of including the readers and raters of your poem which makes your smooth flowing poetry lines extra appealing and interesting Good writing to you and Thank you for Sharing
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Your poem does a Great job of including the readers and raters of your poem which makes your smooth flowing poetry lines extra appealing and interesting Good writing to you and Thank you for Sharing
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much! I greatly appreciate it!
Comment from F. William Lester
Wonderful poem. Great picture. Your words are calming and much like dreaming - good dreams - are soothing to your spirit. Well done. A beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing it. Have a wonderful day and be well.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Wonderful poem. Great picture. Your words are calming and much like dreaming - good dreams - are soothing to your spirit. Well done. A beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing it. Have a wonderful day and be well.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much for the kind words! Much appreciated!
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My pleasure.
Comment from Shanbreen
I love the flow and the rhyme in this poem. You, Jodi, must have wonderful dreams with "the thoughts between your words... forwarding my dreams". Well written.
BTW, I couldn't pick up on what you meant by "to grow within my planted seed"? Very well written.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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I love the flow and the rhyme in this poem. You, Jodi, must have wonderful dreams with "the thoughts between your words... forwarding my dreams". Well written.
BTW, I couldn't pick up on what you meant by "to grow within my planted seed"? Very well written.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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My planted seed was the poetry that I have started. This was the seed planted that is now growing. Thanks for the great review!
