The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from Wendy G
Well! Hopefully it's over and they are all safe. Difficult to feel sorry for Louie and Marcos. But at least the others with their ghostly support team all seem to be safe, and well on the way to making some important discoveries. Very well written. Couldn't ask for more drama!
Wendy
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Well! Hopefully it's over and they are all safe. Difficult to feel sorry for Louie and Marcos. But at least the others with their ghostly support team all seem to be safe, and well on the way to making some important discoveries. Very well written. Couldn't ask for more drama!
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Wendy. I guess when you write in the middle of the night, you write a little darker than usual. I enjoyed it though...not the part of not sleeping... but where the story went. Thanks so much for the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ricky1024
This chapter number 44 was another well written post rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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This chapter number 44 was another well written post rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for stopping by and reading another of my chapters in this story. I appreciate your kindness and the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
How I wish I could award this chapter a six, Carol. It was so exciting. That Louie and Marcus died, was for the best, they will have to live in purgatory for eternity. And they have found the book! Now they need to find the sword, surely William will be the best bet to know where to look. Fingers crossed!! Well done, my friend. I don't know how you write like this and so fast! I wish I could! I'll now wait for the next part. Love and hugs, dear talented friend! :)) Sandra xxx
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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How I wish I could award this chapter a six, Carol. It was so exciting. That Louie and Marcus died, was for the best, they will have to live in purgatory for eternity. And they have found the book! Now they need to find the sword, surely William will be the best bet to know where to look. Fingers crossed!! Well done, my friend. I don't know how you write like this and so fast! I wish I could! I'll now wait for the next part. Love and hugs, dear talented friend! :)) Sandra xxx
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Good day, Sandra! I was thrilled to find you'd read this chapter this morning. I couldn't sleep last night, so I finished it and posted. Just got up again (5:30) and checked to find you smiling at me. I think the last two chapters have been my favorites. I feel that the ending now will be a bit of a letdown in a way, or else maybe it's sadness because I have to let my characters go. Either way, I am so happy that you enjoyed the chapter. Your praise is worth much more than the stars. Thank you.
Smiles, hugs, and love, Carol