The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Crooks with a conscience. Of course. LOl I enjoyed reading. This is really good. I can't wait to read more.
"We need to get to the river, "Tony muttered as they crouched beneath (river," Tony)
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Crooks with a conscience. Of course. LOl I enjoyed reading. This is really good. I can't wait to read more.
"We need to get to the river, "Tony muttered as they crouched beneath (river," Tony)
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Thanks for the help as always. It's fixed and the boys are at the river...wonder who else is coming after them? Thanks so much for the review and your thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm glad that Benny saw the goodness in Tony and Terrence, they are just small time crooks but not bad crooks. I hope they survive the river. So far everything is going to plan, now we will see what happens when Patrick's 'friends' arrive. That will be a fun piece to write. Another fabulous story, my clever friend. Well done!! :)) Sandra xxxx
These gremlins popped up in your post, just go into edit and take them out. They won't come back. xxx
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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I'm glad that Benny saw the goodness in Tony and Terrence, they are just small time crooks but not bad crooks. I hope they survive the river. So far everything is going to plan, now we will see what happens when Patrick's 'friends' arrive. That will be a fun piece to write. Another fabulous story, my clever friend. Well done!! :)) Sandra xxxx
These gremlins popped up in your post, just go into edit and take them out. They won't come back. xxx
â?" like the tortoise â?"
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Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Fixed those little guys and kicked them to the curb! Thanks for pointing it out. As for the story, I am loving it and can't seem to let it go. Should be starting a new one, but this one refuses to end. Everyone is ready to have a shoot out at the okay corral....or something like that!
Smiles, hugs and love, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
It looks like there witll be three fewer poeple for the police to round up. I'm sure the ghost had fun cunjuring up a storm. It will be a shock to Louie an Marco when they find the escape route on fire. A lot of excitement with the murder. The guys are brutal
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It looks like there witll be three fewer poeple for the police to round up. I'm sure the ghost had fun cunjuring up a storm. It will be a shock to Louie an Marco when they find the escape route on fire. A lot of excitement with the murder. The guys are brutal
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Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Can't wait till Louie and Marcos get what's coming to them. Wish I could figure out how to take Frankie down too, but he's pretty good at keeping his hands clean. Thanks so much for the review.
Smiles, Carol