The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
If you post another chapter tomorrow you'll get the six you deserve. This is so well worked out, Carol, it's fabulous how it's coming together. I'm going to love what happens next, our ghosts are such fun!! I can't wait to see the others come, the ones that Patrick has called on, that will be hillarious fun. Very well done, my clever, talented friend. MORE PLEASE!!! Love and hugs, Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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If you post another chapter tomorrow you'll get the six you deserve. This is so well worked out, Carol, it's fabulous how it's coming together. I'm going to love what happens next, our ghosts are such fun!! I can't wait to see the others come, the ones that Patrick has called on, that will be hillarious fun. Very well done, my clever, talented friend. MORE PLEASE!!! Love and hugs, Sandra xx
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Been back to painting today so I haven't been able to write. Hopefully I get up early and can slam out another chapter. I know where its headed but not exactly how we will get there. I'll be as surprised as you.
Love ya, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Marcos should listen to his gut. Things aren't as they seem and that's good for our heroes. i am liking this story a lot.
The sound was deafening. alerting Terrence and Tony to the action. (a comma not a period after 'deafening', but I'd make it stronger - The deafening sound alerted Terrence and Tony to the action.')
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Marcos should listen to his gut. Things aren't as they seem and that's good for our heroes. i am liking this story a lot.
The sound was deafening. alerting Terrence and Tony to the action. (a comma not a period after 'deafening', but I'd make it stronger - The deafening sound alerted Terrence and Tony to the action.')
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Fixed it your way and it is better. Thank you, of course. Yes, their greed is going to get the best of them and they'll pay the price.
Smiles, Carol