Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Too bad that Patrick couldn't help Sandra. But perhaps she needed to be in the jail in order to give that information to her boss by phone and also have these police officers follow her.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024

i think her little overnight stay (regardless of how uncomfortable) will pay off for Sandra in the end. Though she certainly didn't want Les in on her story, at least not yet. And Patrick???? What has he been up to?
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is another really great chapter full of suspense. I will be waiting for the next chapter to see what happens to Sandra. Please check this out:
he couldn't get her out of hi for some unknown reasons mind. "
(he couldn't get her out of his mind for some unknown reason) maybe?

Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024

Thanks for catching the error, Teri. It's been fixed and a couple others as well. Poor eyesight, crazy fingers and grammerly... admit it, I'm an old lady!! Thanks as always, Carol

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

One can always be sure of drama upon drama. A very exciting chapter. But I am not sure Michael would really be permitted to leave his post to follow Sandra. Looking forward to more, as always.
Wendy
Edit: clamped his mouth closedOnny.
I did see something else. Michael Sullivan, her nemesis, appeared at the door eager to see her aHeon (again?)

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024

Errors are fixed but thanks for catching them. Between grammerly, my eye sight and crazy fingers on the keyboard, this story doesn't have much of a chance. LOL Maybe I could blame it on the ghosts!! Thanks as always, Wendy.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Esther Brown

Excellent

Reading along enjoying, then tripped over aHeon, and �¢?" Help! I like the getting arrested part. Good addition. Sort of thing any good reporter is going to do: snoop and trespass. Sandra is no chicken. Esther

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 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024

Thanks, Esther! The errors are fixed. Grammerly and I are having some issues of late. And I appear to be losing. Between that, my eye sight, and crazy fingers on the keyboard, the story doesn't have a chance. LOL Thanks so much!
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This chapter was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues

Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day

Doctor Ricky

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 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024

Thanks so much for stopping by to check out one of the chapters of this ghost story. Appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol